My sales pages need HELP!!!
My site: www.howtobellydance.com.
I'm hoping to get some direction on how to make the copy work - is there a formula that works on my kind of site? Is there some of it that should just be trashed altogether? If anyone has a few minutes to take a look and give me some advice, I'd sure appreciate it.
Or, if you know a couple sites that have well laid out copy that I could kind of use as a template, that would be great too. I'm looking on Clickbank for samples too.
I'm going to make my home page an entry page so people can go where they are interested, then use the individual pages more like sales pages for one particular thing, and will be redesigning the whole site once I figure out how to do the copy. My coaching didn't really focus on sales pages the way they're done now, but more on website content, so this is what my coach wanted. I'm not happy with it and neither are customers, since they're not buying much. So it's all messed up.
What I really need is more advice on what SHOULD be there (and in what order) and what should NOT be.
I'd really appreciate any help.
Jana
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