I've never heard of that course before (sorry). Something I would invest in, however, is an ESL course. The flow of your squeeze page is broken up by words that just don't fit correctly... Or even just a book on writing in English. Heck, even just read a bunch of those copywriting books (or even just salesletters) and emulate the way they write. It'll probably help a lot!

Hope I didn't offend, I know getting the pattern for another language is tough... I'd hate to write copy in a language other than English, because I could never sound like a native speaker! In fact, I probably couldn't even write as well as you do in another language, so kudos for that.

hahaha...Don't worry...Anyway, I'm "trying" to improve my English.

Glad I didn't offend Just wanted to point that out, because a lot of ESL speakers and writers aren't aware of the differences between "proper" English and "spoken" English, and you're on the road to being a good copywriter - I'd hate to see you lose out on sales just because of that

I am tutoring a young woman who is struggling to express herself as a native speaker for a written essay test she must pass to become a teacher. She is probably more articulate and has a bigger vocabulary than 80% of native speakers, but there are many grammar errors and awkward sentence construction in much of what she writes. I am in awe of anyone who speaks a second language well enough to even communicate at the most basic level.

I agree that ESL courses will help your writing flow in a more natural way. You have my respect for your efforts because I too know I would not do very well communicating in a language other than my own. Good luck!

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