Brian Wilson - who he? The genius behind The Beach Boys. Look it up.
Oh ok... I'll spell it out. If you're just going to swipe and clone some other dude's copy... sure - you'll probably have some results - plenty of bozos have done that (PM me and I'll give you a list) . But if you really want to kill it - be yourself - write your own damn copy. Your reader will appreciate it. And you'll go on to co-pilot Maxy's imaginary jet.