Is the traffic going to it have a well established business
or after a business opportunity?

Best,
Ewen

Biz op. just building a list. so most traffic will come through banner advertising on "make money" forums/blogs

What are your backend sales funnels like?

When testing copy its important to only change one thing at a time, or else you won't know exactly what brought the raise or drop in opt-ins.

I would start by changing only ONE thing at a time. As far as the copy goes, you should model it at least similar to what you are pitching on the back end. This makes the transition from opt-in to sale smoother imo.

Thanks @ewen, I'll most likely split test something along the lines of yours.

@JustinTyme yes, I'll only change things slowly when testing but as for the backed sales funnel.

Squeeze Page> "Immediate monetizer" ($7 product)>upsell to main product>thank you page.

Then the email sequences just go along the lines of email every 2 days and...content, content, content, promo, content, content, Promo, etc.

Thanks for the Squeeze.. will see how it converts..

any more opinions?

Well, many points that I would change before I would even consider testing:

1. The background image is lame.
While you might find it relaxing, most people will find it boring.
Find something that is a little more exciting. Woman on the beach, beach, city lights...
A lonely country road with mostly sky is probably not good for conversions.

2. You ask for email and first name. Scratch that name field. Does only harm your conversions.

3."The Top #1 Method To Generating
$5,000-$10,000 Per Month In 2014
Sign Up Now!"

4. "The Top #1" redundant for no reason. Either it is "The Top" or it is "#1".

5. "$5,000 - $10,000": What exactly? If you say a range it's nothing particular. $5,667.50 works better.

6. "Sign Up Now!": Does not add anything. Will only reduce conversions.

7. "Download the report": Turn it over to them: "Your Report".