Please Review And Give Feedback So I can Improve ROI

Great feedback. Thank you very much. I am going to have to fix that. I have free articles we have written for people on the forum here with the stipulation that we would be able to post those on the website. We will have to get those posted ASAP.

We are also going to post a trial offer or something of the sort with 1 - 5 articles as you mentioned as that seems to be a constant theme I hear from people. We really appreciate the feedback, thank you.

Very average stuff and in some places, substandard. In your copy you make this statement:

"Our unique process for creating custom content and articles is specifically designed to ensure the highest possible content quality, that you are seen as an expert in your market, and with completely unique information that makes you stand out from everyone else."

The sentence is awkward. It should be broken into two sentences. You talk about 'unique information' making your client stand out from everyone else. What does that mean?

Outside of new scientific discoveries there's very little unique information left in the world. You might be able to present info with a unique perspective or place it in a unique context, but unique info, I don't buy it. You've also got the word 'unique' all over the page. Get yourself a thesaurus and find another word, maybe definitive or distinctive. At least show your prospect you're trying a little.

In the following paragraph you've misspelled, thurough. It should be thorough. Having a misspelled word on a writing site is a major sin. If I were looking for a writer and he or she had a typo on his site, I'd simply assume he either doesn't get it or doesn't care. The sad thing is, these days more than half of your potential clients won't even notice... Good luck.

The writing on your home page is pretty bad. Sentences don't flow properly, and the idea isn't communicated very clearly.

Is this the kind of quality I can expect in the articles you write for me? If so, I wouldn't even pay $5, let alone $15.

I'd say that's your first problem. Sure, your copy isn't good, and as Tina mentioned you've got no samples (which are very, very important if you're a service based business)... but ultimately if you can't write, you've got no business being a content writer.

-Dan