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Please Critique My Membership Site!

by kL33tomm
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h@@p://emotionalclearinghypnotherapy.com/

Please also suggest methods to promote it so that people will sign up for the membership!

Thank you.
#critique #membership #site
  • Profile picture of the author Tim R
    I'd suggest hiring a copywriter.

    At the moment, the site is a bit of a mess. Everything about it seems amateurish, including the low resolution photos you have chosen to use. Get some decent shots taken of yourself.

    You have an 'about me' page but nothing to really show what you can do for your clients. People don't care about you, they want to know how you can help them. Your site doesn't emotionally resonate with your prospects in any way.

    When I click on the different hypnosis options the only thing that happens is the image changes, to things that have nothing to do with hypnosis. You need separate pages for each of the individual services you offer.

    The YouTube video is way off the mark. You're trying to sell whatever it is (it's kind of confusing) right from the start without establishing a need in people and showing how you are offering the solution.

    There's so many things you need to fix here, I don't suggest trying to get traffic yet until you address all of the issues.
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  • Profile picture of the author @i
    take the Designed by Elegant themes link off, dont give links out to unrelated sites, apart from that just keep building it up, add quality content, i would suggest quality over quantity. Dont just add a tonne of random content just for the sake of it, make sure everything is amazing
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    • Profile picture of the author Derek Felton
      Originally Posted by @i View Post

      take the Designed by Elegant themes link off, dont give links out to unrelated sites, apart from that just keep building it up, add quality content, i would suggest quality over quantity. Dont just add a tonne of random content just for the sake of it, make sure everything is amazing
      I totally agree! Your site and services should be the best reflection of you and how you will serve people. Take some more time to improve the quality before you promote it. Best of luck!
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  • Profile picture of the author JonReyes
    Have you thought of hiring a web designer? I would go on Fiverr.com and see if anyone can add any quality graphics to your site, probably for $5 a gig - plus you get revisions if you don't like the first few drafts. The site looks a little bland and the image on the right of the header is very poor resolution. Also, the headline "Improve Your Life" along with the subheadline below it could use be WAY more eye catching / attention grabbing than it is now.
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