
Please critique my VERY FIRST video salesletter
Here is my very first VSL: http://copybuddy.com/ (it's more of a test than actually a sales letter for a product that I own)
I would really appreciate it if you could give me some feedback on it. The sales letter is 10 minutes long and I understand if you don't have time to watch it all. But feedback on the first minute would be great too.
Background information: I saw a product called CopyHour (check it out at CopyHour.com -- CopyHour.com) the VSL is basically for a clone of that product (autoresponder series of classic sales letters for you to copy out by hand). I "borrowed" some of their landing page copy for the VSL...
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