"My first landing page" review. Come absolutely rip apart my copy
I've just created a simple landing page to gather email address for marketing a new service in my niche (I provide drum samples for rock and metal producers).
I would love some feedback on what I could do to the copy and/or layout to improve the effectiveness.
Be as mean as you like! I'm tough enough to take brutal honesty, and I know it can be fun to tear apart a noob from time to time (if for no other reason than to release some steam).
www.drumtrunk.com
Have at it!
And just to clarify a few things after reading through the sticky "checklist" at the top of this forum:
This is nothing more than a business validation landing page. I'm using this to see if the interest for this service is large enough for me to invest time and money into. If I reach a certain number of subscribers, I will go through with the business.
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