NEW Product: Please critique my sales letter - neewbie here
I am looking to launch my first product online and I will be launching it with the butterfly marketing script ( that's the easy part ).
I would appreciate if some of you could critique my sales page & my upsell page.
I would feel a bit better knowing what I can fix before launching this site live.
http://adsensegoldrush.com/upsell.html - upsell
A total newbie at sales letters ( most of the sales page was written for me, I added bonuses and the check boxes at the bottom ) , upsell page was all me.
Any thoughts out there ?
Regards
Jason
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