I am launching a personal development membership site featuring a monthly subscription. I would be grateful if you would read the copy and give me some feedback before I begin to invest in traffic, product development, design, etc.
Right now, there are no design elements on the page at all except for my graphic header.
Check it out here Find Your Purpose in Life
I have tweaked this copy I don't know how many times in the last two weeks trying to refine the message. But, it feels like something is missing... or perhaps it's too wordy...
One thing I am is coachable and open. If you feel that certain things should be added or discarded, please let me know.
My goal is to speak to people's hearts and demonstrate the value of what I'm offering and make it a no-brainer opportunity for personal growth.