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Updated website according to comments, thoughts? Also, advertising?

by masaharustin
2 replies
Hi all,

Two days ago I posted here.

My father and I have made changes to the site based on many of your suggestions.

If you wouldn't mind taking a look, we are open to all comments and criticisms.

Also, we are getting ready to start advertising. My dad is currently working on social media, but would like to place ads. How can we go about finding good sites to advertise on? What would our best options be? For now he would like to avoid ppc, it hasn't worked for him in the past but if you have thoughts on that we would like to hear them.

The site is here.

Thank you,
masaharustin
#advertising #comments #thoughts #updated #website
  • Profile picture of the author JohnRyserson
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    Nice effort for your first site.

    I would suggest more proof elements.

    Maybe add in some video testimonials to go with the written ones.

    Also add in a video of you or one of your students showing off some of the coolest moves, to give the prospects a visual idea of what they can expect to learn from your coaching.
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  • Profile picture of the author drewfioravanti
    The site is a mess. I was so distracted...and reading the black text on a dark background was too much. I gave up on the copy after trying to read the initial headline. I'd hire someone who knows a bit more what theyre doing to fix it for you.
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