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Please help me a bit with my sales page

by justinjp
8 replies
Hello guys,
Since you guys are the best in the marking I need some of your help.

I just bought a website from my brother and I think there's missing something.

Please tell me what to add.delete ....

http://www.cpamoola.com

thanks a lot !
#bit #page #sales
  • Profile picture of the author MontelloMarketing
    First thing to do... Delete your brother from your list of business people you trust.


    Originally Posted by justinjp View Post

    Hello guys,
    Since you guys are the best in the marking I need some of your help.

    I just bought a website from my brother and I think there's missing something.

    Please tell me what to add.delete ....

    http://www.cpamoola.com

    thanks a lot !
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    • Profile picture of the author justinjp
      I don't trust him much. don't worry .
      I bought it from it because I really liked the ebook and because he needed money.

      but why ? haha
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      • Profile picture of the author Kyle Tully
        Originally Posted by justinjp View Post

        I bought it from it because I really liked the ebook and because he needed money.
        And yet...

        "I make more then 3500$ per month with those methods"

        :rolleyes:
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  • Profile picture of the author MaggieDavid
    Get rid of the clickbank man with the money looks tacky
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  • Profile picture of the author MaggieDavid
    correction I mean Clipart Man - sorry have clickbank on my mind today!
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  • Profile picture of the author David Raybould
    Justin...

    This page needs a lot of work before
    it converts even remotely well.

    Read some good books on copy, then
    spend a fortnight re-writing it.

    Yes, it needs that much work.

    Also, get rid of the huge pic of the guy
    with the moneybag. That's one of the
    most valuable areas of the page, and
    you're wasting it on clipart.

    Good luck.

    -David Raybould
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