This sales page is the home page of my writing services web site. I have had some very helpful people(Alexa, travelinguy, John McCabe - Thank you) who commented on a previous version of the home page. I have made many changes based on their observations.
1)Can you please make suggestions on improving it further?
2)It seems to me that the site is good enough to start prospecting. Do you suggest the same?
3)Some of my friends are saying that the website is too dull. I am of the opinion that this is a writing website and hence the only attractive thing on my website should be content. Also, it is my opinion that people who are looking for such a service will not find it dull. If I am wrong about this, please make suggestions on how to make it better.
On one hand I feel that I am stuck with analysis-paralysis, but on the other hand I think that I should spend enough time to get it right.