3 Secrets To A Killer Sales Letter

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So, you want a sales letter that pulls new
customers into your business left and right?

Then here's 3 BIG rules you gotta follow with
your sales letter.



1. Appeal to their emotions

Last week I sat down to start work on a new
sales letter for a client of mine.

I was pouring through forums, magazines, and
blogs for the target market.

There was one specific thing I was looking for...

What emotions people were relating to their niche.

I wanted to know what made these people happy.
What made them sad. What scared the living
bejeezus out of them.

Over the course of about 3 days, I ended up
with a small notebook full of notes, almost entirely
about their feelings.

With this information I can craft an amazing sales
letter that not only sells - but connects to the
reader in a way most other's can't.

And when you're writing your own letters - REALLY
focus on knowing how the prospects feel.

Know their fears. Their joys. Their worries.

With this ammo, you can get almost anybody's
attention.



2. Use a good story

A few months ago I was hired to help write a
letter to try and beat a control.

The original sales letter was pretty good.

But right away I noticed it didn't really have
much of a story.

It was almost entirely 'offer' based.

Which, in some markets, is okay.

But this market was one I felt would respond
much better to a good story.

So I ended up spending nearly a week on
writing a story that pulled at the (ideal) reader's
heartstrings every few words.

Well, when the client ended up split testing
between my letter and his old one - guess what
happened...

My letter ended up beating his by 29%.

It wasn't a HUGE margin, but over the course
of a year it'll add up to over $15,000 in new sales.

That, my friends, is the power of using a GOOD
story in your sales letter.



3. Have a strong call to action (CTA)

Most people toss out CTAs like, "Buy Here!" or
"Click to buy now!"

Meh.

That's just stinky.

And will result in fewer sales.

What you need to do instead of focus on involving
the reader.

Write your CTA's as if it's coming from the reader.

So, instead of "Buy Here!", you could write...

"Yes, Chris - I'm Ready To Get Rid Of My Acne!"

See how that works?

It's much clearer what the reader gets and when they
read it in this tone, it does something interesting...

As best as I can tell, their brain actually interperets
this as them saying it themselves.

That's just kind of a guess, but I've split tested
this pretty extensively and (almost) every time it
ends up with an increase in sales.


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So go try these out.

If you've got a sales letter out there already, start
implementing these rules right away.

Then, come back here and let me know your results.
#killer #letter #sales #secrets
  • Profile picture of the author clever7
    Very interesting…

    After learning more about copywriting I believe that I was silly because I cared so much about creating products that would really help people solve their problems.

    Instead of working hard to create perfect products, and then pay a copywriter to write a sales letter, and also pay him/her commissions for selling the products I managed to create after years and years of hard work, besides also having to pay for traffic since I must drive traffic to the sales letter, it would be more advantageous for me to become a copywriter.
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    • Profile picture of the author nmchant
      Originally Posted by clever7 View Post

      Very interesting…

      After learning more about copywriting I believe that I was silly because I cared so much about creating products that would really help people solve their problems.

      Instead of working hard to create perfect products, and then pay a copywriter to write a sales letter, and also pay him/her commissions for selling the products I managed to create after years and years of hard work, besides also having to pay for traffic since I must drive traffic to the sales letter, it would be more advantageous for me to become a copywriter.

      Why not do both and be your own copywriter?
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  • Profile picture of the author nmchant
    Well said, Chris! Thanks for the share.
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  • Profile picture of the author Aji Raman
    Good tips Man

    LOVE

    -AJ
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  • Profile picture of the author clever7
    So, instead of "Buy Here!", you could write...

    "Yes, Chris - I'm Ready To Get Rid Of My Acne!"

    See how that works?

    This is the best part, according to my opinion.

    The word ‘buy’ is so dangerous. It generates an uncomfortable feeling.






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    • Profile picture of the author Elenny
      Great info. Thanks for sharing!
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  • Good points

    having a good balance between logic and emotion will further push the sale over the line.

    Dancing between the 2 is vital for a good result.

    PROOF is also vital. you can have a dog of a sales letter kick major ass with proof alone.

    We are hard wired to like things quick as easy. they help a lot too.
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  • Profile picture of the author sethczerepak
    #3 is solid gold. Deceptively simple, but rarely followed.
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  • Profile picture of the author JonReyes
    Great advice!
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  • Profile picture of the author DavidTile
    Good tips. I find #2 to be the most important -- you should always be telling a good story!
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    • Profile picture of the author EtScribis
      Great tips! Anyone have any recommendations on resources for learning how to create better sales letters?
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  • Profile picture of the author hassaankhan
    Great tips!

    Loved CTA and Call-to-Action part...
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  • Profile picture of the author Sajun Becker
    Solid advice, this resonates with my experience.
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  • Profile picture of the author Tan Shengg
    Agree with Chris Ramsey.
    But I do have to add - Know your audience is very important before planning your story.
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  • Profile picture of the author lhrowley
    Great stuff from the OP and responses!

    One thing I've learned with CTAs (and this is just my experience) - the word "invest" can drastically outperform "buy."

    I recently did a split test for a client on sales copy for a MMO product. The test was on the CTA... One version said "Buy Today" (what the client wanted) and the other said "Invest in Your Future Today" (what I wanted), with no other changes. "Invest" performed 56.2% better.

    Of course, that depends on your target market... but it's something worth trying out.
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  • Profile picture of the author Thesisss
    Thanks for the share Chris, i liked the atmosphere of your acting, the word "buy" has nothing to do in a place where the whole image is about emotions, feelings. "Hey, chris, am ready to ..." is a great time-bridge, if lets the customer focus on the result not the investment. Cheers
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