Looking For A Little Help...
Let me start out by saying this: I'm not a copywriting expert, nor
will I probably ever be. I try to keep my sales pages short, sweet,
and to the point. As it turns out, however, this particular strategy
isn't working too well with my latest project.
Looking over my stats, the typical visitor is spending about 3:00
minutes on my sales page. The problem, however, is that hardly
anyone is buying!
So I'm here to ask all of you wordsmiths out there for some a little
help with my page. Would anyone mind giving me an honest critique
on my sales page?
The link is below. However, I can't for the life of me work my way
around the BFM script and send you to just the OTO. So it will
send you right to the homepage. I'm not trying to squeeze emails
out of anyone, so if you'd prefer, you could just signup with a fake
address - anything@warrior.com, so I know which ones to delete.
www.DoubleAgentMethod.com
Thanks guys. I appreciate any help you can give to me.
All the best,
Jesse Kemmerer
kemmerer.j@gmail.com
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