Can A Non-Sleazy Dating Sales Page Work? Critiques Please!
I've been following the forum for a while now, but this is my first-ever post. The amount of talented people in this forum is incredible, and I hope you'll let me tap into that knowledge to get my page converting (Thank you in advance!) (I did read the Chris Ramset checklist before posting)
I've been a dating coach for over 4 years, and I've helped guys all over the world find success-- because I actually care about giving good, useful advice (which most don't)
My Product: I just launched my first-ever product on Clickbank: TinderRockstar (http://www.tinderrockstar.com). It's a guide teaching men how to get huge results (and reach their dating goals) using the dating app Tinder.
My Problem: The dating niche is JAM-PACKED with the sleaziest and most ruthless sales tactics you could imagine ("Get laid in 3 hours" "Date 10 different women"), and most of the products out there are full of terrible advice...I'm finding it hard to compete without using sleazy tactics.
My Questions:
1) Will you guys critique my sales page (because it hasn't converted in ~150 visits)
2) Any ideas how I can compete against the sleaze without dropping to their level?
Thanks everyone!
The next time they hack one of my websites I'm going to donate DOUBLE.
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