Ok, I need some Serious Help
I have 3 pages, optin page, Sales page, and the blog page. I would like review on. I promise I'm not hitting you over the head with super bad copy, but would like some pointers. I'm reading allot of copy, and I'm actually dedicated myself to becoming a great copy writer within a reasonable time. (should be less than 100 years at this point)
I am a very good sales person, IN PERSON, but I'm trying to translate that into copy. holy cow it that a different monster.
I have thick skin, please be direct, open, and helpful in your comments. I'm sure people laugh at the "your copy sucks" posts, but I would prefer better responses at this point.
Thank you
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the sale page raisingcapitalsecrets.com/sales
the blog front raisingcapitalsecrets.com
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