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I need help with my sales page , can you ? :)

by yosk
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Hi guys.
I recently started to drawing Simpsons's look a like character ans wanted to sell it online.. So I created a website on weebly and my only traffic is facebook.

I have reached 200 unique visitors in 4 days , but none of them convert.

I want your help.
My ad(which in posting around facebook)

. First try
Hi guys.
I just created a website that sells unique Yellow Portrait , Simpson Character design , with your picture !!
What do i mean ?
just enter my small little website !

SimpsonMe - Make Yourself one of the Simpsons! - Home

James.

And my new one

Hi Simpon Guys.

Ever wanted to make yourself look like a simpson family ?

Why won't you check out this amazing and unique website , that is making Beautiful Yellow-Simpson-Look-a-like Portraits ,
Just like the Simpson character design - only with your picture !!

What do i mean ?
just enter my small little website !

SimpsonMe - Make Yourself one of the Simpsons! - Home

James.



It thia any good ?
Plus , if you can check also my webaite i will bw happy.

Thanks !
#page #sales
  • Profile picture of the author perryny
    Are you sure you're allowed to do this? Legally?
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  • Profile picture of the author angiecolee
    Pretty sure making money off someone else's intellectual property is a no-no.

    Simpsons is definitely going to be off-limits.

    Even the yellow character is iffy - 'cause most people who would want that know exactly where it comes from. Run this through an intellectual property attorney before you even THINK of making money. Otherwise you're gonna lose it all to a lawsuit.
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    I didnt understand extcly why would that be a problem..its just look a like ..
    Its drawing of people in yellow...
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    If people in any way, shape, or form can confuse your work with Simpsons drawings (which you imply they would since you're directly comparing your work to those drawings), then that is violating someone else's intellectual property.

    You may be in another country, but that doesn't mean the studio/creators don't have the cash to get you shut down. Read up on intellectual property:

    Israel: IP Laws and Treaties
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  • Profile picture of the author sethczerepak
    Originally Posted by yosk View Post

    Hi guys.
    I recently started to drawing Simpsons's look a like character ans wanted to sell it online.. So I created a website on weebly and my only traffic is facebook.

    I have reached 200 unique visitors in 4 days , but none of them convert.

    I want your help.
    My ad(which in posting around facebook)

    And my new one

    It thia any good ?
    Plus , if you can check also my webaite i will bw happy.

    Thanks !
    I'm not an attorney, but I know a few of them and have been in the middle of enough intellectual property discussions to know that you're swimming in shark infested waters with a 22oz Porterhouse steak as a necklace.

    There are entire companies devoted to scouting out sites like this and getting a cut from the settlements when the lawyers take you to the cleaners.

    Most of them won't mess with you while your'e small time, not enough capital to be had by taking a bite out of you. But the second you start making money, they'll smell blood and come swimming in your direction.

    If I were you, I'd head for shore and rethink your business model.
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    • Profile picture of the author yosk
      Originally Posted by sethczerepak View Post

      I'm not an attorney, but I know a few of them and have been in the middle of enough intellectual property discussions to know that you're swimming in shark infested waters with a 22oz Porterhouse steak as a necklace.

      There are entire companies devoted to scouting out sites like this and getting a cut from the settlements when the lawyers take you to the cleaners.

      Most of them won't mess with you while your'e small time, not enough capital to be had by taking a bite out of you. But the second you start making money, they'll smell blood and come swimming in your direction.

      If I were you, I'd head for shore and rethink your business model.
      Originally Posted by angiecolee View Post

      If people in any way, shape, or form can confuse your work with Simpsons drawings (which you imply they would since you're directly comparing your work to those drawings), then that is violating someone else's intellectual property.

      You may be in another country, but that doesn't mean the studio/creators don't have the cash to get you shut down. Read up on intellectual property:

      Israel: IP Laws and Treaties
      Wow... Didnt thought of that .. Thanks a lot you
      I currently chaned and unpublished my webdites..


      Thanks !!
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