I need help with my sales page , can you ? :)
I recently started to drawing Simpsons's look a like character ans wanted to sell it online.. So I created a website on weebly and my only traffic is facebook.
I have reached 200 unique visitors in 4 days , but none of them convert.
I want your help.
My ad(which in posting around facebook)
. First try Hi guys. I just created a website that sells unique Yellow Portrait , Simpson Character design , with your picture !! What do i mean ? just enter my small little website ! SimpsonMe - Make Yourself one of the Simpsons! - Home James. |
And my new one
Hi Simpon Guys. Ever wanted to make yourself look like a simpson family ? Why won't you check out this amazing and unique website , that is making Beautiful Yellow-Simpson-Look-a-like Portraits , Just like the Simpson character design - only with your picture !! What do i mean ? just enter my small little website ! SimpsonMe - Make Yourself one of the Simpsons! - Home James. |
It thia any good ?
Plus , if you can check also my webaite i will bw happy.
Thanks !
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