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ok help with my sales page please :)

by devan
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i posted this a while back and made some changes.

Learn How To Massage DVD Box Set | Indian Head Massage | Full Body Massage | Luxury Facial Massage

the page is aimed at people who already know about indian head massages and would like to learn how to do it.

i have had 136 clicks on the buy now links but no sales have gone through :S
so in theory I've lost about $6000+

can you please critique this copy, its my first sales page.

im going to stick with this niche until its profitable
#page #sales
  • Profile picture of the author TajwarAlexander
    BIG THING. As soon as you land on the page you have a picture of a DVD. The people already know now they are being sold something.

    This is a sales Letter. Identify/Remind them of the problem first...and then let them know the solution and that you have it.

    If they know from the beginning that you are selling them something it will turn away many visitors...or they will just scroll to the bottom right away and take a look at the price and leave because you haven't had the opportunity (with your copy) to build value with your sales letter.

    Hope that helps!
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