Critique please! Be as blunt as you can, desperately want to improve!
Its about meeting women in clubs, a dating product!
My client isn't yet ready with the product fully so many places are left out, or are arbitrary....but the main sales letter will remain the same(more or less) unless you guys help me please
Also,what about the way the page looks?
I know its really basic but the client can neither afford a VSL nor get a designer....sad but thats just the way it is(as it was told to me)
Any help?
Be as blunt as you possibly can, can you make me cry? I'm such a perfectionist and I really need improvement...need help guys!
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