Critique of my headlines
I am tasked with creating a headline for a advertising campaign. Below are several headlines I cam up with. Thoughts and suggestions would be appreciated!
A clean investment
Persistence, meet vacuum
Invest in clean
A clean investment
A vacuum that lived happily ever after
Thanks in advance,
Zorak16
all day long." - Earl Nightingale
..and you WILL contribute a verse.
Indifference is the enemy that must be conquered.
Appeal to the crowd by addressing the person.
all day long." - Earl Nightingale
all day long." - Earl Nightingale
all day long." - Earl Nightingale
all day long." - Earl Nightingale
all day long." - Earl Nightingale
all day long." - Earl Nightingale