I wrote this sales page a few weeks back, and I need some help fixing it up and (hopefully) get it to start converting:
The product helps people get more sales from their email lists by building a better relationship with their subscribers. The product consists of a training video where I cover a technique (and other helpful tips) to build up the goodwill and trust with your list.
I launched that product as a WSO a couple of weeks ago and it completely tanked! I'm talking zero sales, which was weird as my WSO's (I always write the copy) usually get a minimum of at least 20 sales.
Anyways....there must be some obvious gaping holes/flaws in my copy thats killing the conversion rate.
Hopefully you can critique the sales page and tell me whats good and what sucks, or any things I should explain more, etc.
Here is the link to the sales page again: List Dissection
Thanks a ton!