Tear My Sales Letter To Shreds
I hired a copywriter to do this sales page and I was told it was HORRIBLE.
So I got my money back and did the sales letter myself.
I know it sucks. I need to know WHY it sucks and HOW to fix it.
What's missing?
What should I take out?
What should I change?
I left out the header because I was told that sucked too and I haven't created one. I can't afford to hire anybody and I know anything I create will also suck. So I may just go without the header. I see many Clickbank sales letters have no header. Hell, most of them now are just a video with a little Easy Sketch Pro cartoon. I can't believe what I'm seeing at Clickbank today. The "great looking" sales letters are dead and gone.
Anyway, that's it. Like I said, tear it to shreds but don't just say it sucks. Tell me why and tell me how to fix it.
I need to make this work but I have to do it myself. I don't have 3 grand for a copywriter and my $97 effort was obviously a waste of time.
That's it. Let it rip!
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