Starting Copy With A Question

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Has anyone split tested starting your sales letters with a question vs. no starting with a question. To me, starting with a question immediately throws up a red flag that it's a sales pitch. I'd imagine that the sales letter that does not start with a question converts higher. Just curious if anyone has data on this theory.
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  • One of the most successful letters in history starts with a
    question: "Do you make these mistakes in English?"

    so I think your underlying assumption is proved false.

    The truth is you have to test. No one can tell you one way
    or another for a particular copywriting problem.
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    • There's a difference between using a question in a headline and using a question as the first sentence. I'm not totally sure which one you are referring to.

      IDoTheLegWork is referring to a very successful ad that uses a question as a headline, but the first sentence of the copy is not a question.

      I personally like Joe Sugarman's strategy of using a short, interesting sentence as an opener.
  • One of the best ways to begin a sales letter is with a question. Sales
    people know that asking their prospects questions, not only builds
    trust, but also extracts important information on which to base their
    appeal.

    Consider this opening of a sales letter for a fictitious product that
    restores hair in bald men:

    Dear Friend,

    Are you worried about your present hair loss? Have you already
    tried hair restoration products that didn’t live up to their claims?
    Are you embarrassed to look in the mirror? Are you about to settle for
    the myth that ‘this is just genetic and nothing can be done about it?

    As you read through each question you can see how the copywriter tries
    to enter a conversation with the reader by showing that he knows what
    concerns him. The prospect also assumes that since you raised the
    questions that you have the solutions to his problems.

    In the case of a sales letter you cannot ask the prospect questions
    expecting to get a live answer, since the letter is a one way
    conversational tool. But asking the questions that the prospect is
    already asking helps build rapport and gets his attention.

    Some of the greatest thinkers and philosophers asked the correct
    questions that led them to discover some of the laws of nature that we
    take for granted today. Asking questions early in the sales letter can
    also cause the reader to think in the direction you want him to
    follow.

    Since you are trying to build rapport at the beginning of the letter
    you want to ask questions with a definite ‘yes’ answer. Questions such
    as, “Do you want to make more money than you are making now?” will get
    the client nodding in agreement with you. The answer to the questions
    should also be the main benefits that is offered by your product or
    service.

    Questions also help to engage the reader early in the sales process
    because he is forced right away to think about the answers. The
    copywriter must assume that readers come to the letter with a
    preoccupied mind and the only way to break through this natural
    barrier is to tune the mind to a different frequency. Questions are
    therefore great attention-getters.

    Another effective way to use questions in the sales letter is to raise
    objections in the form of questions and then answer them one by one.
    This is one of the ways that I have used the Frequently Asked
    Questions (FAQ) for clients and incorporate these into the main sales
    letter. If people keep asking these questions this means that your
    sales message is not answering them and these questions are really
    objections to buying your product.

    For example, if you are selling a software product that helps people
    create videos to be uploaded to YouTube and prospects keep asking how
    large are the video files output from your software, then this
    question is one objection you must meet squarely.

    In that case I would suggest that you raise the question: “Does you
    software produce high quality videos with small file sizes?” I would
    then immediately answer that question by illustrating the file size
    inputs compare to the output and comment on the quality versus the
    file size.

    Questions are powerful sales tools that are frequently taken for
    granted and not used often enough. Asking a question can often engage
    a reader more than simply sharing facts with them. And getting
    attention these days is one of the toughest battles to be fought
    online.

    -Ray Edwards
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  • -Ray Edwards
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    • Yes, asking a question in the opening sentence is a good way to engage the reader... it must be a question they are already asking themselves... or would be interested in the answer.
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  • Try turning your question around.

    Put the burden of proof on yourself.

    That'll give you your answer.

    You're one guy on a forum who thinks it sends up a red flag.

    Meanwhile, thousands of successful advertisements over the last several decades have started with a question.
  • Your post starts with a question.

    Anyway, what you personally like, what you "imagine" - there are billions of people on the earth. Thousands in your market. If you cast them as feeling and imaging the same way you do, then you're only selling to yourself.
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    • LOL. My kids ask me all the time, "Daddy, can I ask you a question?"

      Then I'll say, "You just did!"

      Huh?

      -Ray Edwards
  • What is this woman doing?

    Seen here:

    Bud Weckesser: Master of Case Study Marketing

    It sold millions of dollars of books.

    The question as a headline depends on the TARGET. And probably more important, where the target meets the promotion.

    In print media, it is a good stopper. Slows down the eye, arouses curiosity.

    Yes, use the question...when it works. HOW to know? Test.

    gjabiz
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  • Sales pitches should be natural.

    You should be looking to support or help others with your ideas. When they ask how you know so much you tell them. It just so happens that you work in the field that is why you know so much. When you help people they are more likely to trust you and want to deal with you at a later date.

    So to answer your question I feel you are over thinking it, be natural.
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    • I just watched 11 infomercials in the last 2 days, I play them in the background while I'm working sometimes. And out of the 11 infomercials I watched 9 began with a question.

      Check it out next time you see one. That alone tells you question openings work. At least for now. I wonder if they'd be as effective once everyone starts doing it? Stay Tuned!
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  • Alright so here's my take Jared,

    I do believe that using a question in the first sentence makes it look like a sales letter.

    Because, i myself think of it that way.

    So, instead of using a generic question in the first sentence, you must use a pattern interrupt question.

    A question which basically gets the attention of the reader.

    Now, a pattern interrupt can be done in many ways.

    Either through using an controversy, or a statement which has no real relationship with the letter.

    This works wonders.

    Anyways do your testing.

    And let us warriors know the results.

    Ab
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    • People know if they are going to be pitched to regardless of whether or not you use a question as the headline. The question you should be asking yourself is, "is my headline intriguing enough for buyers (potential buyers) to read on?" Now of course the rest of the copy must be good, but they wont even read the rest if you don't have a killer headline. And I prefer questions in headlines as i feel that it makes the reader engage with the sales pitch.

      Hope that helps.
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    • Using a pattern interrupt on an opening question is far to early.

      Pattern interrupts are used either for refractionation or in the middle of a nested loop.

      Putting one right at the start is like starting your sales funnel with a spiral staircase!

      I understand where you're coming from in that it will attract attention due to it's novelty, but remember the mind will be at it's most critical at the beginning of the letter, and introducing an incongruity might just stop it dead in its tracks and interest.
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  • Btw you can use Pattern Interrupts like

    "From the desk of:-
    so so so"

    This works as well.

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    Has anyone split tested starting your sales letters with a question vs. no starting with a question. To me, starting with a question immediately throws up a red flag that it's a sales pitch. I'd imagine that the sales letter that does not start with a question converts higher. Just curious if anyone has data on this theory.