Website Copy Critique/Trouble with getting messages across
I think my issue a lot of times is getting a specific message across in the most effective and efficient way possible, or painting a picture in the best way possible. Selling a vision, idea.
Despite not being a copywriter like many of you are, I feel like I can tell when something just doesn't feel right.
I'm looking for suggestions and opinions on my website, not necessarily things like design/appearance which can be more easily changed, but more such as actual copy, placement, etc. I'm open to all criticism/suggestions however.
I want people to be able to see it and know immediately EXACTLY what it's all about, and be "on board" with it. I want it to be concrete and very clear what the "mission" statement so to speak, is.
Sometimes I feel like I'm not the best at communicating/getting across my visions and ideas. Primarily "selling" people on them, which is important.
Here is my site
Feedback?
Thanks all
Ahmad
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