Store Feedback Request

by tanooja1 7 replies
Hi Friends,

One of my friend started apparel business for men & women. Please give feedback on this store.

Every suggestion is highly appreciated.

Thanks.
#ecommerce sites, wholesaling & drop shipping #boomer #feedback #request #store
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  • Profile picture of the author dave_hermansen
    Sorry, I didn't bother going past the home page. The grammar is so bad, I couldn't get past it. If you are going to sell to people who speak English, find a real native English speaking writer who knows how to write copy - not a foreigner who says they know English.
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    • Profile picture of the author Importexport
      Originally Posted by dave_hermansen View Post

      Sorry, I didn't bother going past the home page. The grammar is so bad, I couldn't get past it. If you are going to sell to people who speak English, find a real native English speaking writer who knows how to write copy - not a foreigner who says they know English.
      Dave, you have highlighted a major problem. Native English speakers will be turned off as soon as they read the broken English and terrible grammar so often seen when written by people who have learned just enough English to be able to communicate.

      When I first visited China back in the late 1970s I met someone who was proud of his English skills. So proud in fact, that he was teaching English free of charge. The problem was, I could hardly understand a word he said, and he was trying to sell me something!

      Unfortunately, it is obvious that few of the newcomers to this forum have the money or they won't spend any to pay for good English writing for their websites.

      I have used the services of a brilliant native English speaker in Australia, who has written advertising material for me in the past and has improved on written material that I sent him. He is what I would call a wordsmith, and better still, he understands marketing.

      If people could find someone like that to do their writing for them, they would discover that the money they pay is well spent.

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  • Profile picture of the author Kay King
    One of my friend
    The thread is BS - another post that contains the OP's sig link in the post - has been doing this consistently - and apparently mods approve without looking for self promotion.

    Has been reported - nothing happens.
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    • Profile picture of the author dave_hermansen
      Originally Posted by Kay King View Post

      The thread is BS - another post that contains the OP's sig link in the post - has been doing this consistently - and apparently mods approve without looking for self promotion.

      Has been reported - nothing happens.
      Self promoting a clothing site on a forum about website design and SEO? What is the point? Maybe they are too naive to realize that links are nofollowed here.
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  • Profile picture of the author Kay King
    There are several doing it right now - I think some are "SEO promotors" being paid to post on forums....others are clueless going to self promotion.

    The number of posts I've seen TODAY with links (both blatant and anchor) in the posts is ridiculous. Tells me mods aren't reading thread at all here.
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    • Profile picture of the author Importexport
      Originally Posted by Kay King View Post

      There are several doing it right now - I think some are "SEO promotors" being paid to post on forums....others are clueless going to self promotion.

      The number of posts I've seen TODAY with links (both blatant and anchor) in the posts is ridiculous. Tells me mods aren't reading thread at all here.
      Some that I have reported still remain in place after more than a week. The practice is severely downgrading this forum.

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