My First Dropshipping Store

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Hi Warriors,

I have nearly finished my first dropshipping store. I need your advices regarding the store. Before launching it i need to make sure that it is 100% well done. the store is www.inonefit.com

So, what do you think guys?
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  • Profile picture of the author dave_hermansen
    There are no reasons to buy from you anywhere on this site. No trust seals, no indication that the site is even secure.

    Other than a few sentences on product pages there are no words on this website. No words = no ranking. The few sentences that are on product pages have extremely poor grammar.

    Even the sentence, "Free shipping for Worldwide Today", at the top of the header is not correct English. Poor English = No Sales.

    Your Privacy Policy page also suffers from poor grammar and some really questionable policies that would make me run away from the site. For instance, "We may disclose your personal information if we are required by law to do so or if you violate our Terms of Service." If someone violates your terms of service you can broadcast their personal information?

    A whole lot of your categories have no products in them, which is a very bad user experience. Remove or hide any categories that have no products in them. Even your FAQs link has nothing on the page as do almost all of the store policy pages. The same is true for all of the social icons.

    I could go on and on, but people pay us for site reviews and these are just the things I saw in the first 2-3 minutes of looking at the site. I realize you said the site is "nearly finished" and there is still some work to be done but to me, it looks like almost no work has been done and this site is far from finished. Maybe you just were wondering if we liked the colors and logo.
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    • Profile picture of the author hassanov
      Thanks dave_hermansen for these remarks.
      For the grammatical issue yes you are right. All what it is written will be edited. I meant the design of the website. For the categories i know i have so many products to use i did not complete them yet. Anyway glad you have replied to my post. I will get the store complete and repost it in few days.

      Thank You very much
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    • Profile picture of the author Daniel22
      Originally Posted by dave_hermansen View Post

      There are no reasons to buy from you anywhere on this site. No trust seals, no indication that the site is even secure.

      Other than a few sentences on product pages there are no words on this website. No words = no ranking. The few sentences that are on product pages have extremely poor grammar.

      Even the sentence, "Free shipping for Worldwide Today", at the top of the header is not correct English. Poor English = No Sales.

      Your Privacy Policy page also suffers from poor grammar and some really questionable policies that would make me run away from the site. For instance, "We may disclose your personal information if we are required by law to do so or if you violate our Terms of Service." If someone violates your terms of service you can broadcast their personal information?

      A whole lot of your categories have no products in them, which is a very bad user experience. Remove or hide any categories that have no products in them. Even your FAQs link has nothing on the page as do almost all of the store policy pages. The same is true for all of the social icons.

      I could go on and on, but people pay us for site reviews and these are just the things I saw in the first 2-3 minutes of looking at the site. I realize you said the site is "nearly finished" and there is still some work to be done but to me, it looks like almost no work has been done and this site is far from finished. Maybe you just were wondering if we liked the colors and logo.

      No one could have said it better. +1
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  • Profile picture of the author Splatterfox
    Originally Posted by hassanov View Post

    Hi Warriors,

    I have nearly finished my first dropshipping store. I need your advices regarding the store. Before launching it i need to make sure that it is 100% well done. the store is www.inonefit.com

    So, what do you think guys?
    I can absolutely agree with anything dave said (even though I wouldn't have started with trust badges because this is the least thing of all the stuff mentioned you should worry about).

    The problem with a store like yours is that you try to do too many things at once without doing anything properly. You sell something of category A, something of category B, nothing of category C (even though you list it??) and a little bit of category D.

    I know that in theory it sounds good to "test products" to identify their popularity, but in reality a store like yours is pure gambling. You are hoping that the visitors that come to your site may like one of the very few other products on your site.

    Right now, you are trying to please everyone while in reality pleasing no one. This is one of the most common (if not the most common) mistake dropshippers make. Focus on one thing, one niche ("fitness" is not a niche) and build everything around that. Be an awesome supplier of that specific stuff you sell, not someone selling 3 pieces of every product category you might think of. Right now you are competing with Amazon, if I was you I'd rather niche it down and make it special to a point where the "big guys" can't reach with all their reputation and product selections.

    Check the link in my sig to view my YouTube channel with around 60 videos about this topic already, I'm sure you will find a ton more info there. Good luck!
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    • Profile picture of the author dave_hermansen
      Originally Posted by Splatterfox View Post

      I can absolutely agree with anything dave said (even though I wouldn't have started with trust badges because this is the least thing of all the stuff mentioned you should worry about).
      I agree with everything you said, as well. Like I said in my original post, I gave the site a 2-3 minute look. Real store reviews that we do take us at least 2 hours to complete.
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      • Profile picture of the author hassanov
        Thank You Splatterfox

        i got your idea. Fitness is not a niche, i will focus on one or maximum 3 products. Can you please send me your youtube channel link ?
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  • Profile picture of the author Splatterfox
    Originally Posted by dave_hermansen View Post

    I agree with everything you said, as well. Like I said in my original post, I gave the site a 2-3 minute look. Real store reviews that we do take us at least 2 hours to complete.
    Thats true, I do the same service and it takes me a similar amount of time.

    Originally Posted by hassanov View Post

    Thank You Splatterfox

    i got your idea. Fitness is not a niche, i will focus on one or maximum 3 products. Can you please send me your youtube channel link ?
    Sure, its https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChp...LzfNY87njGy-Ww
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  • Profile picture of the author webdigitalsme
    I agree with all their comments here.
    1 push advice: PLEASE get someone to revise your pages, the marketplace here is one that you can go to.

    I myself has just started a dropshipping site. Uploaded few items on different categories and wasn't hoping for any sales BUT luckily I got my first 2 sales for a cheap product. My profit was just a few dollars but that's a good motivation for me to keep going and really make some time to hustle and keep working on it.

    Anyway, good luck to you and hope you fix those pages first before you make any effort in marketing your site.
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  • Profile picture of the author smwzc
    improve your statement of website or product. Generally, it looks appearing for a customer.
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  • Profile picture of the author MValmont
    I would highly recommend you to change the logo.
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