Any advice on description/sales copy for ecommerce websites?

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We run a small website for sporting goods products. Our descriptions are very simple and lackluster. I feel that better descriptions could help our sales. Descriptions with graphics and better wording. Currently our descriptions look like this:

What do we need to do in order to help sales? Do we need descriptions like Amazon?
Example(direct link)

Are there any services that can help transform my sales copy into something that looks much better?
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  • Profile picture of the author markmiller24x7
    What I feel like, you have included too many points describing your product, you can conclude the whole thing in 4-5 Points, which gonna look more professional.

    The example which you have sent is actually a proper example of how you can describe your product in 4-5points including all the main detail which are necessary for your customers.
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  • Profile picture of the author dave_hermansen
    For every product, think of how it is going to be used and what questions a consumer may have about it and answer those questions.
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