Any advice on description/sales copy for ecommerce websites?

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We run a small website for sporting goods products. Our descriptions are very simple and lackluster. I feel that better descriptions could help our sales. Descriptions with graphics and better wording. Currently our descriptions look like this:

What do we need to do in order to help sales? Do we need descriptions like Amazon?
Example(direct link) https://www.amazon.com/Charger-Anker...A294P4X9EWVXLJ

Are there any services that can help transform my sales copy into something that looks much better?
#advice #copy #description or sales #ecommerce #websites
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  • Profile picture of the author markmiller24x7
    What I feel like, you have included too many points describing your product, you can conclude the whole thing in 4-5 Points, which gonna look more professional.

    The example which you have sent is actually a proper example of how you can describe your product in 4-5points including all the main detail which are necessary for your customers.
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  • Profile picture of the author dave_hermansen
    For every product, think of how it is going to be used and what questions a consumer may have about it and answer those questions.
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