Please review my ecommerce Website

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Hello together,

Although my website is in german, I wanted to ask you for help and recommendation with respect to my ecommerce website. Which version do you like better and do you recommend?

http://www.windows-keylogger.com/



Please give me your opinion!

Thank you and Best Regards
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  • Profile picture of the author CammyCash
    Looks clean and operated fast. Very simple, not quite sure what service your operating, but that's not important.
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    • Profile picture of the author s3cr3tos
      Thank you, but I wanted to know which version you prefer? There are two versions on the picture...
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  • Profile picture of the author s3cr3tos
    I now have updated the website, do you like this better?

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    Erfassung aller Emails, Chats, Passwörter, Tastenschläge und besuchte Webseiten:

    www.windows-keylogger.com
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    • Profile picture of the author Lokahi
      Originally Posted by s3cr3tos View Post

      I now have updated the website, do you like this better?

      I like this version. There are clear bullet points to the side, along with explanation of how each one benefits the user. Good use of color for the template header, very eye catching. Very convincing text.

      Just wondering, you are selling a key log software? I'm assuming this is for tracker users on your own personal computer. For instance, if your boyfriend/girlfriend uses your personal computer, you can read what is on their Facebook/private messages and spy on them to see if they are cheating, etc. And, I'm guessing your target audience wants to do that (spy on loved one). But you should know, there is a risk of legal complications for someone using your software in this way. There was a famous court case in America where a man spied on his wife's emails (and found out she was cheating); filed for divorce and tried to get sole child custody (using her emails as proof) and lost the case when it came out that his 'evidence' of infidelity came from using this type of software to spy on her. I guess it's a risk your buyer will have to shoulder. Still, even keylogging a loved one to spy is illegal in many places.
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  • Profile picture of the author tdanz
    To me it seems the last version would produce the highest conversions. But always a good idea to A/B test.
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  • Profile picture of the author Monja
    hi and nice to meet a fellow german member ;-)
    i personally like the second site. as a webdesigner and internet marketer i usually put my emphasis on quick, short message delivery. so i like the listed points what i get on your site. good luck with your business!
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  • Profile picture of the author OliverTrent
    Second Version wins
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  • Profile picture of the author kite6w
    The version with least text and concise and images. Most visitors are lazy, unless they look specifically for detail information. The visitors will like it if you make things more convenience for them.
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    • Profile picture of the author vedremo
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      Originally Posted by kite6w View Post

      The version with least text and concise and images. Most visitors are lazy, unless they look specifically for detail information. The visitors will like it if you make things more convenience for them.
      This. Generally.

      But let the market decide.

      A/B Test, or periodically alter the design and see what increases click through rate and sales. Could be users want more detailed information, could be users like the lack the details.

      If I was you I'd probably consider doing one test with only 4 dot points (Tim Ferriss seems to think 4 is somewhat of a magic number with these things). Then a "Click for More" on the next line, which takes to other features and the order form.
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  • Profile picture of the author smileverse
    The latest version is better. Visitors don't like too much text. If you can't attract their attention in first sight, they will click away at once, except they are very interested in your product. In addition, live chat may be a good feature for you to increase conversion rate, such as Comm100 Live Chat, Live Person, etc. Good luck.
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    • Profile picture of the author chg
      Definitely the 2nd version. Easier on the eyes, short and to the point...easier to convert your traffic into sales. Make sure the sales copy is solid!
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  • Profile picture of the author beniprofex
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    I prefer the 2nd version. But only you can test on actual visitors and decide what converts for you.
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