Please review my ecommerce Website

Thank you, but I wanted to know which version you prefer? There are two versions on the picture...

I like this version. There are clear bullet points to the side, along with explanation of how each one benefits the user. Good use of color for the template header, very eye catching. Very convincing text.

Just wondering, you are selling a key log software? I'm assuming this is for tracker users on your own personal computer. For instance, if your boyfriend/girlfriend uses your personal computer, you can read what is on their Facebook/private messages and spy on them to see if they are cheating, etc. And, I'm guessing your target audience wants to do that (spy on loved one). But you should know, there is a risk of legal complications for someone using your software in this way. There was a famous court case in America where a man spied on his wife's emails (and found out she was cheating); filed for divorce and tried to get sole child custody (using her emails as proof) and lost the case when it came out that his 'evidence' of infidelity came from using this type of software to spy on her. I guess it's a risk your buyer will have to shoulder. Still, even keylogging a loved one to spy is illegal in many places.

This. Generally.

But let the market decide.

A/B Test, or periodically alter the design and see what increases click through rate and sales. Could be users want more detailed information, could be users like the lack the details.

If I was you I'd probably consider doing one test with only 4 dot points (Tim Ferriss seems to think 4 is somewhat of a magic number with these things). Then a "Click for More" on the next line, which takes to other features and the order form.

Definitely the 2nd version. Easier on the eyes, short and to the point...easier to convert your traffic into sales. Make sure the sales copy is solid!