I want to know if i did this right?

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I just wanted to see if i got the e-mail squeeze page right. Getting Great Deals and Great Stuff Free at ItsaDeal.info and this is for cpa offers. I know its nothing fancy but once you enter your e-mail, I have your e-mail with getresponse then they choose the cpa offer that is on the thank you page. I was going to promote via facebook ads and youtube and any other way i can. so do i have it right? or any suggestions?
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  • Profile picture of the author MeelisM
    Originally Posted by MarijuanaCashCrop View Post

    I just wanted to see if i got the e-mail squeeze page right. Getting Great Deals and Great Stuff Free at ItsaDeal.info and this is for cpa offers. I know its nothing fancy but once you enter your e-mail, I have your e-mail with getresponse then they choose the cpa offer that is on the thank you page. I was going to promote via facebook ads and youtube and any other way i can. so do i have it right? or any suggestions?
    Sorry to say, but the squeeze page looks quite terrible in design.

    The colours are just off...

    The products have a white rectangle background that is way off the background of the squeeze page.

    Nice work otherwise.

    But I would make a better looking squeeze page.

    People wont sign into the current one.

    Just saying so you could make it better!

    If you have any questions, PM me!

    Good luck,

    MeelisM
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  • Profile picture of the author tones
    This might sound harsh but no one will enter their name and email for your squeeze page.

    You have to look at it from there end. Why would they optin because it saids Which 1 Would You Rather Have?

    What is the benefit of them to enter their details none I can see.

    Give them a reason to why they should enter their details is your first step.
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  • Profile picture of the author Alexa Smith
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    Originally Posted by MarijuanaCashCrop View Post

    I know its nothing fancy but once you enter your e-mail, I have your e-mail with getresponse then they choose the cpa offer that is on the thank you page.
    How are people supposed to know that?

    Originally Posted by MarijuanaCashCrop View Post

    I want to know if i did this right?
    I'm afraid not. Sorry, but it falls down in several ways ...

    (i) There's no explanation;

    (ii) The incentive isn't clearly defined;

    (iii) It all looks rather "spammy"/"suspicious";

    (iv) You don't offer any "no-spam reassurances" at all;

    (v) You don't need their names, just their email addresses (and will typically get 15% more opting in, if you ask for email addresses only);

    (vi) You don't need, and should remove, the social media sharing buttons at the top: they come across as being for your benefit rather than for the reader's benefit (really bad move, on a squeeze page!);

    (vii) "Sign up" is a bad expression to use on the submission button: it carries a connotation of "commitment" which will put many people off;

    (viii) The lower 60% of the page is all empty, white space (which you should remove).

    Originally Posted by tones View Post

    This might sound harsh but no one will enter their name and email for your squeeze page.
    I'm afraid I agree.

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  • Profile picture of the author Corey Taylor
    many people here on warriorforum use optimizepress. it's a bit pricey but does the work.
    just a thought
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    • Profile picture of the author discrat
      Yep you need to divulge more information about what people will be getting and how they will be getting it, under what terms, what exactly is it..contest or what ??

      It needs some more work.

      If you are going to convince people to give over their emails to you then you need to be..... well convincing.


      And this is not.


      - Robert Andrew
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