Email to costumer [need help ASAP]

by 0xen
6 replies
i have to email my costumers and i highly needed the correct way to say :
i'm Stacey from "Agency name" , we help more job seekers start and advance their careers than anyone else. i'll be your assistant in this agency , to stat i suggest to provide us with your contact info here :
we have all sort of jobs that's available in your area. after signup you will redirected to multi-option form if you want to further your education , if not just select "Not Interested". You will get a long list of jobs available you can filter them as fit with your needs. when you find the best job for you click [Apply Now] Button to get all the information needed to apply for the job , that's all if you need any further informations i'm available any time we have some partners who's more advanced in this fields if you're interested in you can visit : and i'm here for any question , have a great day
#asap #costumer #email
  • Profile picture of the author askmarcus
    I would suggest you to put these under a webpage... on your email part... brief intro on what you did and redirect them to the page with the details (as above) and the form below.
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  • Profile picture of the author mainuddin
    I think it's good.
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  • Profile picture of the author laurencewins
    Firstly, I would spell the word correctly.
    You wrote costumer (this means somebody who makes costumes).
    I assume you mean customer.

    Secondly, you really need to give us more info before we can give you honest feedback. I am an editor/proofreader/writer. may be able to help if you shoot me a pm with more info.
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  • Profile picture of the author AyiamDigital
    Here you go. Good luck!

    My name is Stacey and I'm from "Agency name," a company that helps job seekers advance their careers.

    Our company has more resources to help qualified candidates than anyone else! I'll be assisting you with finding available jobs in your area, after you have provided us with your contact information.

    Once you sign up, you'll be automatically directed to an online form. If you're interested in furthering your education, feel free to fill out the form. If not, simply select "Not Interested."

    You'll be sent a list of available jobs in your area, and you can filter the list based on your interests. When you find the position that fits you best, click [Apply Now] to apply for that position.

    If you need any more information or have any questions, feel free to get in touch with me at anytime.

    Have a great day!
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    • Profile picture of the author 0xen
      Originally Posted by AyiamDigital View Post

      Here you go. Good luck!
      thanks a million my friend , if you need any thing just pm me <3
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  • Profile picture of the author 0xen
    thank you all
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