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Looking for feedback

by Gulogomi
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Greetings everyone!

My landing page is offering people the first 3 chapters free, and the free ebook will have a link to my other landing page where the subscribers are able to purchase the ebook.

I would like if someone could review my landing page layout and give it constructive criticism. It is my very first "sales page". The video that shows the purchase page and the thank you page is around 20 seconds long, you can pause the video if you wish to read it.

http://screencast.com/t/zMIiF2yKM

Thanks for taking your time reading this!
#feedback
  • Profile picture of the author lostsouls
    Maybe I'm blind but I could not find your link to your landing page
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    • Profile picture of the author Gulogomi
      Originally Posted by lostsouls View Post

      Maybe I'm blind but I could not find your link to your landing page
      Hmm.. That is weird, I really though I placed the link in the thread. I must have forgotten it, but I have placed the link now! Thanks for telling me
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  • Profile picture of the author WebMarketingTool
    It's a good start. A tip, next time post an image instead of a video, easier for me to review. I would put the paragraphs in the middle in 2 columns and bold content appropriately throughout the page.
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    • Profile picture of the author Gulogomi
      Originally Posted by WebMarketingTool View Post

      It's a good start. A tip, next time post an image instead of a video, easier for me to review. I would put the paragraphs in the middle in 2 columns and bold content appropriately throughout the page.
      Thank you very much for the feedback. I will remember that
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