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Critique my optin page please

by prefamous
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I need some pointers on my optin page , please critique my page and provide to improve optin rate.

https://reymarketing.sendlane.com/vi...iate-marketing
#critique #optin #page
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  • Profile picture of the author Mark Singletary
    I get this message and nothing else:

    Whoops, looks like something went wrong.
    Mark
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    • Profile picture of the author prefamous
      Originally Posted by Mark Singletary View Post

      I get this message and nothing else:



      Mark
      Yeah I got that once but just reloaded, I wonder how often it does that, could be an issue?
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  • Profile picture of the author DennisDemori
    Here are 6 suggestions to point you in the right direction:

    1) Use a pre-headline that identifies that specific problem your target audience is dealing with

    2) Use a headline that highlights a specific solution

    3) Describe the situation your target audience is facing in a few sentences so THEY know that YOU know what they're dealing with

    4) Include 3-5 bullets that explain the features and benefits of your Offer

    5) Add social proof (e.g. testimonials, reviews, endorsements)

    6) Use 2-3 Calls to Action that drive home the urgency of why they need to download your lead magnet NOW
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