Need a review of my sales page - please

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Note: I have been a member for a few years mainly as an observer...I lost my password and was having dificulty generating a new one, hence the new id.

I have a sales page at woodybobs.com/squirrelrecipes.html

I am selling a squirrel recipes ebook. I have sold 1 in 45 clicks via google adsense and yahoo marketing. It is a new site, so I am building up my content to rank higher for keywords like 'squirrel recipes'. The 45 clicks today were for 'squirrel recipes' and I only sold one for $3.95. What am I doing wrong with my sales page? Any advice or tips from experienced warriors would be greatly appreciated.

Patrick
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  • Profile picture of the author maurice
    You should post this over at the copywriting forum.
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  • Profile picture of the author Kingshouse
    Originally Posted by woodybobs View Post

    Note: I have been a member for a few years mainly as an observer...I lost my password and was having dificulty generating a new one, hence the new id.

    I have a sales page at woodybobs.com/squirrelrecipes.html

    I am selling a squirrel recipes ebook. I have sold 1 in 45 clicks via google adsense and yahoo marketing. It is a new site, so I am building up my content to rank higher for keywords like 'squirrel recipes'. The 45 clicks today were for 'squirrel recipes' and I only sold one for $3.95. What am I doing wrong with my sales page? Any advice or tips from experienced warriors would be greatly appreciated.

    Patrick
    For starters there is no ad copy on that site.

    What are you asking us to review?

    You need to tell us something about your product before we BUY it!



    K
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  • Profile picture of the author ahuddy
    You should add some photos of the dishes that you can make with the recipes. People like to see what the food is going to look like. When I worked in a restaurant back in the day, the best selling products always had large pics so people could see them and be drawn to them.

    It is hunting season, so it is a good time for the ebook. Someone I used to work with told me they have caught squirrel and ate it before. That was the first time I have ever heard of it.
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  • Profile picture of the author stoica
    You need more content ,and your design... you should hire someone to create your sales letter so it will look more profesional.
    If you need help with the design , I can help you for a very small price (30-50$ ) and I'll create you a totally new sales letter including header image , logo , ecover . If you are interested contact me on :stoica@sodevrom.net
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  • Profile picture of the author kierenm
    Looks pretty good mate. Short and sweet? gross images though.. hope they weren't anyone's pets.

    cheers.
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  • Profile picture of the author spearsy
    I must admit the pictures were not that appealing to me, maybe its because I have never seen this before but id prefer to see a picture of a finished dish and the heads should go :0)
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  • Profile picture of the author Topgunb
    HI Patric,

    Your site needs a whole lot more text, sell the great dished, that are to be cooked. The pictures of the cooked food on a plate would be good.

    Your pictures, are not helping your sales process. If anything they they are hurting your sales.

    People do not want to see the poor little animals regardless of what they are, when we eat them. The pic of the animal triggers sympathy in your
    visitor, and you loose the sale.

    Take one recipe from the book and put it on the site, with a pic of the prepared food. Make sure the meat is in smaller pieces where you cannot distinguish body parts.

    You would do well to put up a opt in link to join your mailing list. Maybe give away a few pointers every few days, or a recipe or 7. This will give
    you a hungry list of people who want your ebook.

    Give the changes a try ... test it for 7 days and then compare results. If it works my name is Brian Carelse you can find me on most search engines. if not go back to the present one.

    Thanks

    Brian
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  • Profile picture of the author BrainDance
    From a graphic designers perspective..needs some clean up work.
    I'd prefer seeing photos of the recipes after they are cooked! It certainly is a unique thing
    some thoughts

    -new ecover and I'm not saying that because it's what I do, but you really need one
    -website header with matching footer
    -better photos of you and the recipes


    content wise ideas to add
    -what makes you an authority on the recipes
    -what does the book have that other books don't

    ideas on promotion
    -try the topsites for outdoor living, I do a lot of campground,fishing,outfitters,trail riding type of websites and I list them with huntingtop100.com, fishingtop100.com and others. Those are the people you want to reach and that will use your product, going the usual ebook marketing avenue is sometimes ok, but you need to get in that niche, find forums or even yahoo groups and promote there

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