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Hello Fellow Warriors,

I'm looking for a review for my new Network Marketing ebook. I've attached it here. Your comments and feedback is greatly appreciated.

Thank you,
Christie
#ebook #review
  • Profile picture of the author EricWPM
    Hi Christie,

    It was a nice overview of NM. Quick read and easy to understand. I liked how you mentioned the pitfalls of NM along with the positives. This should make a nice qualifier to potential recruits.

    This is just nit picking... but some of the body content is real close to the header on a few of the pages. It felt "crowded" A little extra white space wouldn't hurt. The paragraphs below the crowded sections had a lot of extra white space so maybe just balance it out a little and the text will read much better from page to page.

    Nice job!

    Eric
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    • Profile picture of the author Christie Love
      Originally Posted by EricWPM View Post

      Hi Christie,

      It was a nice overview of NM. Quick read and easy to understand. I liked how you mentioned the pitfalls of NM along with the positives. This should make a nice qualifier to potential recruits.

      This is just nit picking... but some of the body content is real close to the header on a few of the pages. It felt "crowded" A little extra white space wouldn't hurt. The paragraphs below the crowded sections had a lot of extra white space so maybe just balance it out a little and the text will read much better from page to page.

      Nice job!

      Eric
      Thanks Eric for your critique and feedback. Your comments are greatly appreciated and will help me with the final edit.

      Best!
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      • Profile picture of the author dmderoeck
        Hi Christie,

        I must say, this is a well designed and thought out book. It's obvious you are catering to a particular audience and it shows. There was a lot of substance and I actually like the format (albeit I like smaller font but I do seem to be in the minority.

        This is also nit picking, you have a typo (extra space or two) in the 2nd sentence under Differentiating The Best From The Rest. I didn't see any call to action so assume you are not giving it away.

        All in all, great book.
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