First attempt at a Kindle ebook - would someone be so kind as to have a read for feedback?

by nmb
5 replies
I have had a first attempt at a Kindle eBook and wondered if someone would have a look and see if I am going in the right direction?

I know its short but as long as I know its moving in the right direction I can expand the sections.
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  • Profile picture of the author Warrior Roy
    Where is your eBook so I can read it?
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  • Profile picture of the author Warrior Roy
    Thank you for providing your eBook to me. I am happy to be able to give feed back on an exceptional first endeavor.

    About the only constructive criticism I can offer is to have someone review it for punctuation and capitalization as it would be appropriate for an eBook.

    You have found a problem and illustrated how to deal with it using excellent insight in creating a compelling read.

    You continually reel in your reader through personalizing and effective imagery. You use good addiction comparisons to show that yours is a functional approach to dealing with any addiction.

    I believe it is a good length; certainly it is not too short.

    Have you thought about a price point? After you put it out as an eBook, you may want to put it out again using another medium such as audio or video.

    I think you will do very well with this product.
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  • Profile picture of the author boladeblogger
    I remember my first time on kindle.. I can guide you on how you can go about on self publishing...

    Let me read your ebook
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  • Profile picture of the author nmb
    Hi Roy

    Many thanks for your PM and your comment on the post. That is some excellent feedback and has given me confidence to push on and finish the eBook. I know there is still a lot of work to do but it gives me hope that I may have a chance.

    I am looking at launching the ebook on Kindle to test the water.
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