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Squeeze Pages NOT converting

by renangll
6 replies
Hi, I have Squeeze pages and classified Ads with hundreds of views and no opt-ins.

Here are some of the headlines that I use. Could you please comment and give me some insight as to what is wrong with them? Any help would be greatly appreciated.

"Master Hypnotist Uncovers The Secrets To Persuading Prospects & Making Money Online With Conversational Hypnosis"
Register Now And Download a FREE course packed full of covert conversational hypnosis techniques!

FREE Video uncovers the SECRET FORMULA used by the most successful internet marketers and how you can use it and start to MAKE MONEY ONLINE in 30 days or less!

FREE video exposes an ELITE affiliate marketing training bootcamp usually reserved for the special forces of affiliate marketing!
#converting #pages #squeeze
  • Profile picture of the author Viramara
    first of all, you say your traffic source is classified ads. how targeted is that? most visitors on classified ads usually are lurking for a while and "oh, no thanks, not for me". I think the first 2 headlines are already catchy. And the 3rd, maybe you should be specific....because affiliate marketing term itself is very broad. Maybe add a little sub-header like "officially steal a system the Elite marketers kept secret to rake in $ xx,xxx a month!"
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  • Profile picture of the author woolabee
    I completely agree with Viramara, your traffic is not
    targeted to your offers.
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    Affiliate Marketing Reviews before you buy.
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  • Profile picture of the author Miriam Higginbotham
    I have to agree with Joseph7384. If your headline talks about hypnosis or secrets of using hypnosis on anything people are automatically going to be skeptical. They may be intrigued enough to click on it but I think the percentage of them converting will be very low. That is just my opinion. People are skeptical by nature.
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  • Profile picture of the author Tom E
    Originally Posted by renangll View Post

    "Master Hypnotist Uncovers The Secrets To Persuading Prospects & Making Money Online With Conversational Hypnosis"
    Register Now And Download a FREE course packed full of covert conversational hypnosis techniques!
    If I were you, I'd lose this headline. There is a complete lack of BENEFIT to the end user here. Without an immediate benefit to grab interest, most headlines are useless.

    Originally Posted by renangll View Post

    "FREE Video uncovers the SECRET FORMULA used by the most successful internet marketers and how you can use it and start to MAKE MONEY ONLINE in 30 days or less!
    Lose this one as well. It has really labored flow, and confuses more than it catches interest.

    Originally Posted by renangll View Post

    "FREE video exposes an ELITE affiliate marketing training bootcamp usually reserved for the special forces of affiliate marketing!
    I highly suggest you get yourself a (free) copy of Blair Warren's "One Sentence Persuasion". It'll teach you just about everything there is to know about sales copy. Here's a link: Blair Warren's One Sentence Persuasion Course
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    5000+ Sold! Product Of The YEAR! From Newbie To IM Expert Without Doing The Actual Work
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    • Profile picture of the author VHSEOMike
      Analyze your visitors properly. Use Google analytics to know the activities of your visitors like what pages they visit, how long they stay on your site, how do they leave the site (closing the page, outbound link, ....)

      If visitors leave by closing the page, then your take action is not clear. So try a different layout. If does not work, then your visitors are not targeted they are searching for another things. I hope that helps.
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