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Experts, please review my educational site landing page.

by ishan0681
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My website The best knowledge community for school students focuses on educational content for K 12 students.

Please point out the good and the bad about the landing page. Specifically

A. Is the value proposition clear?
B. Is the Call to Action effective?
C. Are the images appealing or is the design to simplistic considering that it's for students?
D. Is there something that hinders you from entering your email address?

Any other suggestions would be much appreciated.

Thanks!
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  • Profile picture of the author yangman2011
    "We will never give your email address to anyone." implies that you will give our email away to "someone". No I won't enter my email in that case
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    • Profile picture of the author ishan0681
      Originally Posted by yangman2011 View Post

      "We will never give your email address to anyone." implies that you will give our email away to "someone". No I won't enter my email in that case
      Changed it.

      Thanks for the advice.
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  • Profile picture of the author dazbiz
    Originally Posted by ishan0681 View Post

    My website The best knowledge community for school students focuses on educational content for K 12 students.

    Please point out the good and the bad about the landing page. Specifically

    A. Is the value proposition clear?
    B. Is the Call to Action effective?
    C. Are the images appealing or is the design to simplistic considering that it's for students?
    D. Is there something that hinders you from entering your email address?

    Any other suggestions would be much appreciated.

    Thanks!
    A. the proposition is clear but I think you need to allow people to access more information, so more detail needed.
    B. It is quite clear what your site will do.
    C. Like the design, don't like the logo. It looks like Google and as though it's been drawn by a child (maybe that is what you where trying to achieve, but what ages are you looking at targeting?). That could cause issues and maybe needs to be re-worked. Otherwise the images are good.
    D. No I would not put my email in there, as mentioned before the comment 'We will inform you when site starts.We will never give your email address to anyone.' is all wrong. You need to encourage people to put in their email address. So you could use something like 'Be the first to know when the site launches~! - Your privacy is assured'

    - Also you have empty meta tags, need to complete the description Meta.

    Sorry if that all sounds a little negative, it is good that you are designing your own site, but I look at it and it is my opinion on what I see. o I hope this helps you.
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    • Profile picture of the author ishan0681
      Originally Posted by dazbiz View Post

      A. the proposition is clear but I think you need to allow people to access more information, so more detail needed.
      B. It is quite clear what your site will do.
      C. Like the design, don't like the logo. It looks like Google and as though it's been drawn by a child (maybe that is what you where trying to achieve, but what ages are you looking at targeting?). That could cause issues and maybe needs to be re-worked. Otherwise the images are good.
      D. No I would not put my email in there, as mentioned before the comment 'We will inform you when site starts.We will never give your email address to anyone.' is all wrong. You need to encourage people to put in their email address. So you could use something like 'Be the first to know when the site launches~! - Your privacy is assured'

      - Also you have empty meta tags, need to complete the description Meta.

      Sorry if that all sounds a little negative, it is good that you are designing your own site, but I look at it and it is my opinion on what I see. o I hope this helps you.

      Extremely helpful comments. I am focusing on students aged 12-17 currently.

      1. Could you be a bit more descriptive about 'access more information' thing. Specifically what info is lacking?
      2. Changed the email thing now.
      3. I didn't pay a lot of attention to the logo design as i was trying to keep it along the lines of google. It gives more credibility to the site. I am targetting Indian school students who are wary of giving their email address to anyone. Frankly, i didn't even design the logo, just changed some colors and fonts. Will now try to design it.

      Again, thanks for your advice.
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