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I was wondering what you guys think of my site. I've had many people say it's way too long and I know many people have short attention spans, but I don't know what else to do at the moment.

When I think about it, my sales aren't bad given the amount of traffic I receive. I pretty much get nothing for traffic because I gave up on adwords and focus on article marketing at the moment.

I was wondering if someone could give me some tips of other ways to really get people to my site, because about 20 people a day isn't cutting it. Also I would like people to give honest feedback on my site.

I know I have a lot to do, but haven't had the time to really sit down and think of how to change my site.

My site is below and apparently I can't put links in my posts yet so go to the link in my signature please.
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  • Profile picture of the author linkbuilder
    Dear Friends what to write about your site when the site itself not exists to review or to give any suggestion to get some traffic or else..its showing server not found. Please check your site is working or not? i think you have given a wrong link plz check it and resubmit it and don't worry there is solution to every problems so don't worry.
    Thanks.
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    • Profile picture of the author daneault23
      Maybe you need to try it again. I just tried it and it worked for me. That's weird because that hardly ever happens.
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      • Profile picture of the author linkbuilder
        Originally Posted by daneault23 View Post

        Maybe you need to try it again. I just tried it and it worked for me. That's weird because that hardly ever happens.
        Friend sorry that i didn't provide you any suggestion but what to do still your site is not opening below i am copy pasting the content when i am trying to browse your site.

        Address Not Found

        Firefox can't find the server at Stop Wasting Your Money.

        The browser could not find the host server for the provided address.

        * Did you make a mistake when typing the domain? (e.g. " mozilla. org" instead of "mozilla. org")
        * Are you certain this domain address exists? Its registration may have expired.
        * Are you unable to browse other sites? Check your network connection and DNS server settings.
        * Is your computer or network protected by a firewall or proxy? Incorrect settings can interfere with Web browsing.
        I have cleared my DNS and cleared my cache and cookies etc.. and i tried to surf your site from a proxy site still its showing me the above things so i don't understand whats going on.
        Thanks.
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  • Profile picture of the author Hazelwoody
    So, this is what I can say: I am not sure the translation buttons are a good idea, because the translations tend to be quite rubbish and won't be of much use to your readers. I checked the German one and it turned out horrible.

    There are a few minor design issues, like the two home links in the header (one would be enough, wouldn't it?).
    Did you optimize the website for IE? Keep in mind a lot of us use Firefox and the headlines can look a bit messed up (like the FAP Turbo verdict one).

    Apart from that it seems okay.
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  • Profile picture of the author garciabogard
    first of all....USE A LOGO.
    secondly....get rid of that god damn LIME COLOURED HEADINGS!!!
    they are making me color blind !
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  • Profile picture of the author PeteSafe
    Heck I dont know- the site opened for me first time and obviously for the others! Perhaps linkbuilder has a challenge.
    I found the knitted back ground a bit heavy and distracting. Your points would be better with bullets instead of numbers and then one bold with the nest normal. In Black!
    I am not a fan of wordpress for sales pages unless you have a page which is designed specifically for that purpose.
    Yeah - get a logo and edit the page a tad. Apart from that - go get 'em
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  • Profile picture of the author PeteSafe
    Found this for you. wordpressppc.com.
    It may help with your site as their pages are designed around what you are trying to create.

    Best of luck
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    • Profile picture of the author robinter
      hi there, I found the site to be a little bit amateurish. You could maybe look at Mike's instant affiliate website it looks like some thing that you are trying to create.
      Best of luck.
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  • Profile picture of the author diegor
    I'd go with a different theme (one less bloated), and I would trim that story of yours, people don't have time to read such a long paragraph.
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  • Profile picture of the author Web Res
    I find the whole thing is dancing around and not telling me what you do or why I should care. What do you actually sell?? I think the website name is also a little desparate - sorry. I would never click to a website with that name. Who believes in get rich quick anyway. Are they still out there?

    I would guess that the positive approach would be better. Just tell people what you offer and why it would help them. Don't confuse people with what you don't offer. Write less and say more.
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  • Profile picture of the author danmorton
    Joseph -

    You have a good start here.

    It's just my personal preferences, but I would rather see a short paragraph, with the really important info in bulleted points below - maybe 6 or 7 max.

    I think some simplification is in order, then when you get the hang of it, keep adding content.

    Nice start!

    Dan
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  • Profile picture of the author Amenda Jessera
    Try to do some link building and get your site within top #5 on Google for 3-4 keywords, that will bring you more people. Join to some social networks and spread your link over there among groups
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  • Profile picture of the author bilt
    nice its easy to make money with just urls that your sponsors provide you all you have to do is redirect to their link and thats it
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  • Profile picture of the author mediaguy
    Remember no one has the right formula for you... Everyone has an opinion of what they think you should or should not change. Keep that in mind - now let's look at the facts - you stated your not getting enough traffic but you are making a considerable amount of money with the little traffic that you getting.

    These are my opinions - if you were getting tons of traffic and it wasn't converting then I'd worry about the layout of the site and anything else that may come in to play.

    I think you just need to optimize to produce more traffic - someone said something about "Link Building" that's where I would start first.

    What I would do it take each of the programs that you are marketing and actually write a review on them... When I clicked on the links it took me right to the actual selling page. "just my opinion"
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    • Profile picture of the author daneault23
      Sorry I haven't replied to any answers recently. I've shortened up my home page a little (from what it used to be), so I'm not sure if everyone's seen that or not. I also put my review next to the six products I recommend on my home page too.

      So, mediaguy if you scroll towards the bottom where it has the six products numbered, you'll see it says "Click For Full Review" and it will take you to my review, and not just the sales page. I'm not trying to make you look bad or anything, I'm just telling you that's where it is.

      Also, I want to shorten up the things I say before I get to those products because I know people have short attention spans, but I'm not exactly sure how to do that without losing focus or leaving anything important out.

      By the way, you guys are great. Thanks for all the help. I'm sure with everyone's advice, I'll be making it big (well maybe not that big) in no time.

      Thanks again.
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      • Profile picture of the author lalfan03
        I'm not sure, but I believe you need a privacy policy page to display Google adsense ads.

        Good luck with your site.
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  • Profile picture of the author thegiftoffive
    Its ok but looks like others I have seen.
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