Is This The Right Place?

by mailco
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I'm not sure if this is the right place or not but I'm sure you will quickly tell me.
At need some constructive criticism for my site.
I have revamped and revamped until I'm ready to scrap it all and start again.
I use to to sell this program for over six hundred dollars and want to put it out as an Internet special, I have made it ten bucks until I get a bit of feed back.
Do you think this is to cheap?
Okay, tell me what you think?
Churchill Publications
Cheers
Les Foster
#place
  • Profile picture of the author Elliott
    I didn't spend a lot of time looking at it, but here are some "instant reactions" -

    The "Audio Information products" idea caught my attention, and I thought "This would be a good pitch for a squeeze page." Just the one single concept. Later on you return to it, but in between, there is too much other stuff.

    Personally, I tend to stay away from these kind of of offers with hundreds or thousands of products in them. It is far too much to absorb and I know I will never use even a tenth of what's in there. And so, I passed on it, for now anyway. Even for $10.

    My 2nd thought about it was, "He's got the makings of a membership site there - actually, probably SEVERAL membership sites."

    Other comments: The salesletter doesn't look right> The field is too narrow and therefore the font and text is too small for an old geezer like me to read easily.

    If it's a WP site, I would put in one of those "salesletter" or "Internet marketing" themes that are showing up in the WSO forum, make it look like a salesletter with larger fonts etc.

    Basically, it's not focused enough. A squeeze page offering detailed info about the "Audio Information Marketing" business would have got my email info.

    As it is, it's just not focused and detailed enough to interest me very much, and the letter seems too long.

    And, $10 seems too cheap, especially if as you say you have sold it for much more. The "product vault" you are describing seems to be suitable for one of those big ticket offers, with a little organization, and a killer salesletter. Like the "One Step System" of a couple of years ago, or whatever it was called. (I wasn't in it myself, but recall looking at it.)

    Hope this feedback is somehow useful to you,

    Elliott
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