Review my capture page (opinions needed)

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The good, the bad, the ugly.

I need some honest reviews of this capture page so I can determine where I'm at and where I need to be:

PowerfulOnlineProfits dot com

(Look below in the signature for clickable link)

Is it too "hypey"? Does it need a different headline? Sub-head? Different format or color? More bullets? Less bullets?

Let me know what you really think!


P.S. A clickable link to this website is in the signature below. My post count in the forums isn't 15 so I can't add a clickable link yet.
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  • Profile picture of the author Igor Kheifets
    Hey Dario,

    1. narrow it down, the page is too wide.
    2. only one opt in form is enough.
    3. highlight your bullet points, they are hard to read.
    4. I found the headlines to be hard to read..maybe it is just me.

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  • Profile picture of the author Philipc
    ...i know it's probably just me, but I'd like to see a good graphic. I know that many say you don't need one (or shouldn't have one) but when I'm searching, I like to see one. Even if it's a picture of you!
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  • Profile picture of the author Aljiro
    Im no expert but I think 2 opt in forms would be distracting. Also I do think you need graphics. A minisite and an ecover.

    P.S. If you want you can contact me for graphics.

    Good luck with your site!

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  • Profile picture of the author MarkH45
    Take out the "" and place the headline at the top of the screen.

    Use a fixed width template instead of a fluid one.

    Possibly a video, definitely post a picture of yourself

    Setup a hosting account somewhere (HostGator is only 13 bucks a month) All someone has to do is report your site to blogger and this page will be gone.

    Just my 2 cents.
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  • Profile picture of the author enrikole
    With squeeze pages you need to "focus" people on the opt it form. And It seems this site is not doing it.

    There is a really good course available " 13 sneaky email marketing tricks" , that really teaches you how to create effective pages that converts like 40% of visitors.

    If I were you I would add a short video. Like a cartoony one. I would add some graphics that subtly point to opt in form . And the opt in for it self, I would put on a side..
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  • Profile picture of the author Chris_Willow
    everything others have said plus make headline shorter and
    font tahoma and it'll be easier to read. And that text under
    the optin form "Use an email address you check regularly."
    sounds kind of cheesy in my opinion. You might want to test
    if it actually doesn't decrease conversions.

    Also try putting some sort of border or highlight the optin
    form so it's visible.


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  • Profile picture of the author Kunle Olomofe
    My opinion is you should test it first cos frankly this looks fine to me. Until you test it even the suggestions you're getting may lead you astray, I'm not saying they will but it's always good to test before and/or after you have applied changes suggested by others.
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  • Profile picture of the author DarioMontesdeOca
    Igor, Philip, digitalphantom, Mark, enrikole, Chris and Kunie - Thank You.

    I knew there was a reason I joined this forum.

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  • Profile picture of the author Raydal
    Apart from the large width some big marketers have used optin pages
    like this one and pull it off. But you have to factor in their credibility.

    Normally the less known you are to your prospects the more bells
    and whistles you'll need.

    -Ray Edwards
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  • Profile picture of the author TravisOfferatti
    I've seen many pages just like this one take off; however I would definitely make it less wide. The two fields are pretty standard, users don't REALLY mind putting their name and email in. We run offers very similar to this and they have seen great success. Although...check out the page and I think you'll see a slight difference. The "logo soup" is always a nice touch...I know for a fact this offer grabs opt in rates at above 40% from clickthroughs.
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