Is this English sentence correct?

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Best Weight Loss Guides Selection Criteria?

OR Best Heart Disease Guides Selection Criteria?

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Sorry my poor English and Thanks for your help,
#main internet marketing discussion forum #correct #english #sentence
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    • Yes, if you are asking a question, they are both correct if you are talking about multiple guides. If there is just one guide, drop the "s" on guides.

      Common English, however, would suggest something like:

      Selection Criteria for the Best Weight Loss Guides

      Steve
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  • Look OK to me. Depending on the usage you might not need the question marks, but the grammar itself is correct.
  • Thanks guys.
    I appreciate your replys...
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    • Absolutely. My favorite George Carlin line paraphrased as best I can (showing my age here)

      "The forecast for tonight - dark; with scattered patches of light around morning"
  • I report spam a lot... I have reported 6 tonight so far.

    As for being moderators, the new owners decide who gets to do that. We have no say.
  • Captain here. Decided to leave this one alone even though they may sound trollish to senior members, it has some merit to be a legit query. OP's not promoting something: just asking a little help from seasoned and well-versed native english-speaking members of the Forum about their H1's, taglines and whatnots. Non-english speakers are frowned about here in the forum by some just because they sound nonsensical in context. At least OP's trying here in this thread. Someone may just as well wanted this to be removed or moved to Copywriting subforum, but that's a big no as they would devour the OP the moment they step in their territory. Here's hoping we could be more lenient with these kind of members.

    I hope my reason is enough for you, Theo.
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    • Yeah, no worries Captain
      I 'm not fussed about OP's English, IMO he posted his query in the wrong forum but then again my opinion has led me astray many times
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  • Hey Salesgurus, that is the best signature I have seen since I joined this great forum. It certainly makes people scratch their heads when they read:


    ― George Carlin
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  • This forum is 'where warriors talk about making money'.

    To ctoyun, his question was about making money...specifically, him making money, by using proper grammar in his sales copy.

    I think it's commendable, given the number of people (for whom English is not their first language) who obviously make no effort whatsoever to do so.

    And we all know how professional that looks.
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