the fivver gig some of you suggested

by Action Man

Posted: 9 years ago 7 replies

INTERNET MARKETING

I ask you guys about my new TTS "Bonnie" character.

some of you you suggested I try fivver

Well its up their today

Here

some feedback would be good

Look I am not advertising this, you guys are my pals, smiles

Jim

#fivver #gig #suggested

We Sell Sunglasses 9 years ago

Uh, not to burst your bubble but why would anyone pay for a computer generated voice over?
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- Action Man 9 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by We Sell Sunglasses
  
  Uh, not to burst your bubble but why would anyone pay for a computer generated voice over?
  
  cheers you burst my bubble, that was your intention
  
  I will take it down
  
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  Easy eBay 9 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by Action Man
  
  cheers you burst my bubble, that was your intention
  
  I will take it down,
  
  No harm in leaving it up, you might get a sale. At least then you will get a little reward for the time you spent setting it up.
  
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  Action Man 9 years ago
  
  nagh, I liked warriors, used to be so supportive, and now its changed.
  
  Some dreamers with time on their hands, sitting criticising, probably lazy people, making no money, taking no action,and put down merchants.
  
  Warriors used to be supportive for their own members and kind.
  
  These guys burst your bubble, hurt you, and make warriors a joke.
  
  This guy doesn't realise many videos are using computerised voice-overs.
  
  I am just honest about it.
  
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positivegirl 9 years ago

Hi: my honest opinion:
1. the volume of the music is too high.
2. try to be more enthusiastic at the beginning to engage people, smile, i think you are nice and friendly but people should notice that, it is better for you
3.. during the video, you need to explain how your service works and then show them your example.
4. You need a call to action at the end, so add a piece when you talk and tell people to order your gig whil e smiling and try to be more enthusiastic!

Hope that helps!
Jany Luz Posada,
Italy
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- Jill Carpenter 9 years ago
  
  ^^^^^^^^^^^^^
  
  The quick formula:
  
  Answer these 4 questions.
  
  1. Who are you? (you answered this briefly)
  2. What do you have for me?
  "Exclusive gig for fiverr" is not enough. Perhaps something along the lines of "Let my digital Bonnie be the spokeswoman for your winning product or service." You are selling Bonnie and what she can do to help make sales.
  3. Why do I need it?
  Tell me why (or even have Bonnie tell me why)I need Bonnie to do this for me. Perhaps I am camera shy. Perhaps I need a video with a buxom woman. How will using your Bonnie help me draw attention and increase conversions?
  4. How do I get it? A visual text on the video, as well as the mention of this only being of fiverr for a limited time (or some kind of urgency to order).
  
  As for the video itself, I find Bonnie's abrupt pop on and off the screen a bit scary (but could just be me). I'd probably toss a nice fade on her transitions.
  
  As for the other criticism given above, you shouldn't take it so personally. It's obvious that person is not your future customer. I didn't see it as a mean or harsh comment - just an opinion.
  
  Anyway the whole point of the gig should be to get your feet wet and see if you can sell Bonnie. Work it a few different ways, see how to improve the service, and go on from there.
  
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TheProductReviewGuy Banned 9 years ago

Like PositiveGirl said, you should be more enthusiastic about your service. If people see that you are happy by your service, they will be more comfortable in purchasing it.

Also, you claim to have wanted feedback for the gig but when someone criticized it, you said that Warriors are fat, lazy dreamers who criticize other products/services. I don't think the person was trying to burst your bubble about your service but instead merely wondering why someone would pay for a computer generated voice over.

They're most likely saying that since most voice over services on Fiverr are by real people who show enthusiasm etc.

I wish you luck with your service. It seems good so it'll make a few sales potentially. However you might want to offer 19 more services to boost your sales.
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