Low Low Landing Page Conversions! What am I Doing Wrong?

11 years ago

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11 years ago

I couldnt even find the optin... page is way too confusing.. too much stuff moving around... took too long to load for me...hard to read

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funderburk5

11 years ago

Originally Posted by mrdeflation

I couldnt even find the optin... page is way too confusing.. too much stuff moving around... took too long to load for me...hard to read

yeah i was trying a dynamic approach using parallax my partner and i are fairly new to the mechanic perhaps i should revert to more static means?

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AntonioSeegars1

11 years ago

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funderburk5

11 years ago

Originally Posted by AntonioSeegars1

What you should do is keep things simple. Use a static html page and killer copy. Then have a big signup button at the bottom of the copy.

Write something like this:

Do you want to sit down, write a email, press a button, then have hundreds of dollars flowing in your direction?

If you're like me, then I know you do. That's why I invented AutoAffiliate.

If you can turn a computer on, open a program, write a email, and press a button, then you can use my program to make money.

Before I learned how to do this, my bank account was always lacking. Now I can't wait to get online and check my bank account.

I understand that times are hard, and I don't want to rob the poor, so I'm giving this program away for free!

Fill out the form below, and start making more money.

[EMAIL FORM] - Make This Big!

This is all you need for your sales copy. After people have given you their email, send them an email explaining to them in detail how they can use Autoaffiliate to make money.

This is all you need to do. You don't need the extra stuff.

Dude you are friggin awesome. Thanks you so much for this wonderful sales copy. I will definately use this

although it isn't my product i will take the rest into account upon revising my website. You've pointed me in the right direction i'm no longer astray. Is there any function on the forum where i can perhaps put out a good word for you for doing me such a good service?

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brunski57

11 years ago

Giving too much info away... so I can find out lots about the product without signing up. Need just one page , a very compelling offer, email or name and email request that is it.

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funderburk5

11 years ago

Originally Posted by brunski57

Giving too much info away... so I can find out lots about the product without signing up. Need just one page , a very compelling offer, email or name and email request that is it.

You're absolutely right. I'm scaling down the info as we speak the end result will be much shorter. Update on it coming soon.

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saqarra

11 years ago

Originally Posted by brunski57

Giving too much info away... so I can find out lots about the product without signing up. Need just one page , a very compelling offer, email or name and email request that is it.

Yes, I agree, way too complicated with too many clicks needed - make simple offer on one sales page..

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funderburk5 11 years ago

Originally Posted by saqarra

Yes, I agree, way too complicated with too many clicks needed - make simple offer on one sales page..

Thanks for you're critique. I've redone it. link's in my previous post.
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funderburk5 11 years ago

Originally Posted by mrdeflation

I couldnt even find the optin... page is way too confusing.. too much stuff moving around... took too long to load for me...hard to read

Yeah it seems to appear fine on my chrome browser and I've tried numerious times to resize the optin box but i'm running into problems with the html code i'm using . and the negative space has been corrected multiple times by my designer but i'm beginning to think he doesn't know what he's doing cause it always reverts back to it's original state. I'm glad i was able to get some critique from another point of view. i'm definitely going to make those changes

Also, What do you suggest me doing with my sales copy? I'm curious.
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Sarevok

11 years ago

Your calls to action are WAY too hidden.

I've been a tech nerd for years and had to put in a tiny smidgen of effort in order to find my way to the opt-in below.

Make your registration process MUCH easier and more intuitive.

(I'm all for the "Reverse Squeeze" page type styles, but I would call for a bigger call to action, at least initially).

Just my $.02, I wish you the best.

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funderburk5

11 years ago

Originally Posted by Sarevok

Your calls to action are WAY too hidden.

I've been a tech nerd for years and had to put in a tiny smidgen of effort in order to find my way to the opt-in below.

Make your registration process MUCH easier and more intuitive.

(I'm all for the "Reverse Squeeze" page type styles, but I would call for a bigger call to action, at least initially).

Just my $.02, I wish you the best.

Thanks you so much for you're support. I like the style as well but for the sake of practicality looks like i'm going to switch to more simpler means

and will definately make the call to action alot bigger.

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talfighel

11 years ago

Your page takes too long to load.

If your goal is to capture a name and email from your visitors, why do you need such a long page?

If it is supposed to be a sales page, you need someone professional to work on it.

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funderburk5

11 years ago

Originally Posted by talfighel

Your page takes too long to load.

If your goal is to capture a name and email from your visitors, why do you need such a long page?

If it is supposed to be a sales page, you need someone professional to work on it.

Yeah i was aware on the matter regarding the loading times. that's what i get for hiring my friend who is a novice at web design and yes I'm planning to make it much shorter.

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talfighel

11 years ago

Originally Posted by funderburk5

Yeah i was aware on the matter regarding the loading times. that's what i get for hiring my friend who is a novice at web design and yes I'm planning to make it much shorter.

That's why you need a pro to do this for you and not someone new.

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funderburk5

11 years ago

Originally Posted by AntonioSeegars1

Lol, Many people have had good businesses ruined because they chose to hire inexperienced friends. There are millionaires who have gone broke because of this. Unless you have a training program setup for inexperienced people, it's best for you to stay away from them.

Originally Posted by talfighel

That's why you need a pro to do this for you and not someone new.

Lmao Too true. I just subscribed to lead pages a while ago i'll just leave the coding to the pros from here on out.

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Xochitl Shat

11 years ago

If you invest to a great extent in the promotion system as well as are not able to gain conversions, it is usually extremely unsatisfactory as well as annoying. In the event you’re receiving important yet no conversions, or even there are not enough income to help separate even, it’s occasion for strategy as well as internet site investigation. Listed below are 4 common PPC mistakes that reduce anyone from managing effective advertisments – as well as how you will may go about solving them:
* The adverts mail the wrong information
* The offer doesn’t fit your web page
* You’re not necessarily being strategic in relation to spending your every day finances
* You’re not necessarily ditching poor-performing keywords
May it helps you.

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funderburk5

11 years ago

Originally Posted by Xochitl Shat

If you invest to a great extent in the promotion system as well as are not able to gain conversions, it is usually extremely unsatisfactory as well as annoying. In the event you’re receiving important yet no conversions, or even there are not enough income to help separate even, it’s occasion for strategy as well as internet site investigation. Listed below are 4 common PPC mistakes that reduce anyone from managing effective advertisments – as well as how you will may go about solving them:
* The adverts mail the wrong information
* The offer doesn’t fit your web page
* You’re not necessarily being strategic in relation to spending your every day finances
* You’re not necessarily ditching poor-performing keywords
May it helps you.

Yeah my new squeeze page i'm in the process of making is alot simpler and thanks for the common ppc mistakes. I archived them in a notepad.txt.

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Michael J Anthony

11 years ago

Yes, as was mentioned already above, if you just want optins - you need to make sure its easy to find and simple as possible. Your optin form should be above the fold and not even have to scroll down at all to find it. Get rid of all the fancy dynamic graphics and such. Remember your goal is just to get people to opt in, and after they do, then you can wow them with what you have to offer.

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kursat

11 years ago

I think the load time, color choice and over complex flash loading on page. I would say try to make a simple Landing page and have easy to read "call to action" headline and opt-in form above fold. Sometimes the ugliest landing pages convert better because they are easy to read...just my thoughts.

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11 years ago

It's your call to actions

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Their is too much customization.

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dhiraj192 11 years ago

Content should be kept to a minimum on a squeeze page, at least above the fold. Content bloat only distracts from your offer. That's another thing - you'll want a convincing offer. Something shiny, enticing, and desirable. Your offer needs to be worth surrendering an email address for - in online terms an email address is equivalent to a slice of your soul.
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lusekelo

11 years ago

your landing pages have a lot of problems,i am not an expert but from what i can tell you have too much stuffs(just keep it simple),it takes too long to load,the message is not clear,no optin box in the upper folder

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icoachu

11 years ago

The text font you use is very confusing.

Also the fonts send different emotional signals.

The alternating colors leave much to be desired.

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The Real Deal 11 years ago

A lot of valid points and suggestions have been made about your squeeze page in this thread, but equally important is your traffic source...

You mentioned that you are using Facebook ads, but you didn't mention anything about the type of audience you are targeting and the type of ads you are using etc. Facebook ads take time, effort and money to master...

As an example, have a look at this article showing how just changing objective on the exact same ad can affect your conversion rate: Which Facebook Advertising Objective? Website Conversions or Clicks to Website?
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funderburk5

11 years ago

Thanks For all the feedback guys. I would like for you to know that all of your advice was taken into account in the creation of the new landing page. I couldn't of done it without the people who have taken the time out of their day to help a newbie like me. Thank you!

landing page 2015/04/14

Changes Include:
Simple and static squeeze page
Huge call to action button
straight forward sales copy

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The Real Deal

11 years ago

Originally Posted by funderburk5

landing page 2015/04/14

Changes Include:
Simple and static squeeze page
Huge call to action button
straight forward sales copy

The headline and sub-heading are hugely important on your squeeze page.

I think you need to improve on what you have now to get the results you are looking for...

Current heading (a bit convoluted IMO)
"Finally, A Breakthrough Free Software That Helps You Build Your Email List & Generate Ongoing Affiliate Commissions!"

Current sub-heading (I am assuming you are trying to be clever, and I don't think it works)
"Try not to make money with this simple 5 click software"

New heading (better IMO, but not great)
"Free Software Helps You Build Your Email List & Generate Ongoing Affiliate Commissions!"

New sub-heading (just a quick improvement, but you need to keep working on it)
"This 5-click software WILL make you money. Guaranteed!"

Here below is a link to a great little tool that is quick and easy to use, (and free), when you want to create a new headline. Try it out and keep tweaking the copy on your page until you feel 100% confident that you have something that will work.

Free Headline Generator

Good luck!

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funderburk5

11 years ago

Originally Posted by The Real Deal

The headline and sub-heading are hugely important on your squeeze page.

I think you need to improve on what you have now to get the results you are looking for...

Current heading (a bit convoluted IMO)
"Finally, A Breakthrough Free Software That Helps You Build Your Email List & Generate Ongoing Affiliate Commissions!"

Current sub-heading (I am assuming you are trying to be clever, and I don't think it works)
"Try not to make money with this simple 5 click software"

New heading (better IMO, but not great)
"Free Software Helps You Build Your Email List & Generate Ongoing Affiliate Commissions!"

New sub-heading (just a quick improvement, but you need to keep working on it)
"This 5-click software WILL make you money. Guaranteed!"

Here below is a link to a great little tool that is quick and easy to use, (and free), when you want to create a new headline. Try it out and keep tweaking the copy on your page until you feel 100% confident that you have something that will work.

Free Headline Generator

Good luck!

Thanks for the feedback. I'll definitely put these new headlines to use. I also bookmarked the link. Much obliged

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Shankar Rao

11 years ago

Poor design is the first reason for low conversion. Font color is not highllighting.
Try to put everything above the fold for simplicity.

don't expect your visitor to do lot of work except giving their email

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Rory Singh

11 years ago

You may also want to look into your Ad Copy. It screams easy money and most people just don't believe in 'easy' money (even the newbies here at WF).

You could have the greatest product in the world that actually solves problems but if it sounds to hyped up, people will dismiss it and click the back button.

I use the words Simple, Straight Forward and Lucrative on my lead capture page but I take people through a bunch of hoops before they get there and it converts like crazy.

Also, your traffic has to be highly targeted for your landing page. If there is any type of mismatch, your audience will feel disconnected and hit the back button fast.

IM takes time to learn how to 'tweak' until your beast starts performing for you.

Keep up the good work, you are headed in the right direction. We as marketers learn from our mistakes and then make the necessary adjustment to get things working.

It's a process.

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articlearbiter

Banned 11 years ago

The source and quality of the traffic is a HUGE factor.

Besides, I've seen a number of different squeeze pages that (supposedly) converted at 50-60%.

And you know what? They all looked pretty different.

So there's not really a "best" template- it's based on how you use it.

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Christopher Fox

11 years ago

Check your spelling on the new LP - 'You just fount a way ... "

On your # 6, the bottom of the 'p' is cut off on the three of them in that sentence. Not major, but I noticed it.

As a side note, for future reference, on the first LP, one thing that jumped out at me was the picture - you were pairing it with the 'Road to Online Success', but it was a pic of a dry, barren, desert wasteland. The subconscious is powerful and pervasive - just something to keep in mind when using pics ...

Good luck with the changes.

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funderburk5

11 years ago

Originally Posted by Christopher Fox

Check your spelling on the new LP - 'You just fount a way ... "

On your # 6, the bottom of the 'p' is cut off on the three of them in that sentence. Not major, but I noticed it.

As a side note, for future reference, on the first LP, one thing that jumped out at me was the picture - you were pairing it with the 'Road to Online Success', but it was a pic of a dry, barren, desert wasteland. The subconscious is powerful and pervasive - just something to keep in mind when using pics ...

Good luck with the changes.

Thanks For the FB. I'll be making those corrections Asap. and wow that is a very keen eye you have for detail and you're right, now that i look back on it. It could have a negative influence on the subconscious. I'll be sure to keep what you said in mind next time i use stock photos for promotional purposes.

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icoachu

11 years ago

You might want to work on the load time for your page. It takes a while to load on my end. Your target audience probably wouldn't want to stick around for the page to fully load.

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Brent Stangel

11 years ago

I know you won't want to hear this, but...

The other day when you posted, I signed up for AAX. Then I went and did some research. I personally would not promote it under any circumstances.

You might want to slow down and regroup before you throw more money at something that may not be the best way to go, or even a good way.

You owe me $0.02

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funderburk5

11 years ago

Originally Posted by icoachu

You might want to work on the load time for your page. It takes a while to load on my end. Your target audience probably wouldn't want to stick around for the page to fully load.

Originally Posted by Brent Stangel

I know you won't want to hear this, but...

The other day when you posted, I signed up for AAX. Then I went and did some research. I personally would not promote it under any circumstances.

You might want to slow down and regroup before you throw more money at something that may not be the best way to go, or even a good way.

You owe me $0.02

Why Would you not promote it? I'm Just curious because i came across it a week ago and despite the mixed reviews I've seen. it seemed pretty solid in regards to it's content but, If i'm wrong in my assumptions. I would very much like to know.

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