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What do you think about my new CPA affiliate blog?

by santhana
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How to Get Your Ex Back

I just want to make it simple, so in your idea, you think it will help convert the sales or not if I send the targeted traffics to it?

Is there any bad point, you want to suggest, please help. Thank in advance!
#affiliate #blog #cpa
  • Profile picture of the author misterwrecker
    I'm sorry I couldn't read the whole blog and everything because it's late over here but a few quick things I saw. I would change the header color and the title it looks boring. You need to put what your site is about or a main keyword phrase that is catchy and attract readers. On the right side you could add a skyscraper banner or an opt in email or both. You should also break the content up a little, people don't like to read long paragraphs. It just intimidates them, keep them relatively short and spaced. Just a few things I would do. Hope that helps.
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    • Profile picture of the author santhana
      So what color or title should you put if it was you?


      Originally Posted by misterwrecker View Post

      I'm sorry I couldn't read the whole blog and everything because it's late over here but a few quick things I saw. I would change the header color and the title it looks boring. You need to put what your site is about or a main keyword phrase that is catchy and attract readers. On the right side you could add a skyscraper banner or an opt in email or both. You should also break the content up a little, people don't like to read long paragraphs. It just intimidates them, keep them relatively short and spaced. Just a few things I would do. Hope that helps.
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  • Profile picture of the author Rich Struck
    It looks nice enough but I have to wonder how many people really want their ex partners back. *shrugs*
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    • Profile picture of the author santhana
      I don't know, I guess there are a lot of people still want their ex back. Anyway, I don't really use this blog to promote only relationship, but it will be multi-niches such as business, finance, and diet, ect.

      Originally Posted by Rich Struck View Post

      It looks nice enough but I have to wonder how many people really want their ex partners back. *shrugs*
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    • Profile picture of the author mikeyman120
      Add a few widgets to the sidebar like a banner ad or google adsene. Change the header colors - try a few to see what looks best or get a theme that looks good. Also add an opt in form to the right. Just copy your autoresponder form and paste it into a text widget and you now have an opt in for. I would say if you can get targeted traffic to this site it could do ok with a few changes.


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      • Profile picture of the author santhana
        Thank, mate. About Adsense ads, I don't want to put it, it is better to have people clicking in my affiliate link instead of getting 5 or 10 cents a click from Google. In this niche Adsense doesn't pay well, I guess.

        About subscription box, I guess, I need to consider a little longer, I can see aweber is good, but it cost money every month.

        you are talking about new theme and new design, it is suck for me because I don't know how to coding or even change the image of logo...



        Originally Posted by mikeyman120 View Post

        Add a few widgets to the sidebar like a banner ad or google adsene. Change the header colors - try a few to see what looks best or get a theme that looks good. Also add an opt in form to the right. Just copy your autoresponder form and paste it into a text widget and you now have an opt in for. I would say if you can get targeted traffic to this site it could do ok with a few changes.


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  • Profile picture of the author wbakhos
    Hey,

    hmm.. I see your new.. ok:

    - its very wordy. (bullet points, clear structure) People are lazy and don't want to read.
    - First 2 sentences have grammar errors.. (ie press back button). Most of the text seems to have a fair few grammar errors.. Don't want to be too picky cause english may not be mother tongue.. but get someone to proof read and correct
    - There are no powerful call to actions..
    - I don't understand why there is a "wait before you leave my site" halfway down.. why do you think they should leave then?... ok maybe I will leave.. (hint hint )
    - Google will destroy you because there is only really one page.. expect to pay about 10-15 per click
    - Headline is way too generic.. so is the site. If your promoting a niche then tailor your site to that niche.. General product Review for a specific product is one way for the visitor to think your not an authority in the area.. eg I'd rather learn love advice from people who focus on love advice.. not someone that also sells teeth whitening and ringtones.

    I know it sounds harsh but try to go through some other affiliates in your niche and see what they are doing. Find ones that look great and feel good and ask yourself why it is they are so good.. then adapt yours to suit.

    Hope this helps you a bit.. i'm sure others will also give feedback.. so take it as constructive criticism and use it for the better.

    Cheers
    Will
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  • Profile picture of the author misterwrecker
    Actually the color isn't that bad, I just prefer solid but that doesn't really matter anyway.

    "SANTHANA is offering guide and review on all general product information from A to Z"

    Change that to this:

    "SANTHANA offers guides and reviews on all general product information from A to Z"


    Personally I would scrap this slogan. First of all you have a bold statement but only one product review on your site.
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    • Profile picture of the author santhana
      Wowo, Thank guy. Your comment is appreciated.

      wbakhos: I know it is wordy, but do you think if a person with that problem he or she will be tired in reading the article? I guess some of them would love to explore deeper as they want the information. No like us, we are just marketer, and we don't really want to read that article because we are not in that position, so it should be wordy for us...

      and about WAIT thing , I just want them to click to my affiliate link so bad, because sometimes the affiliate landing page sale, can convince them to buy it. Honnestly, don't really care if the visitor love what i wrote or not, but just want them to click on my affiliate link...at least I get some % to hope...

      But anyway, I will keep up with your comment, because I know I did something wrong, I need to investigate more when I sent some targeted traffic to it and see if it does something out of it.

      Originally Posted by wbakhos View Post

      Hey,

      hmm.. I see your new.. ok:

      - its very wordy. (bullet points, clear structure) People are lazy and don't want to read.
      - First 2 sentences have grammar errors.. (ie press back button). Most of the text seems to have a fair few grammar errors.. Don't want to be too picky cause english may not be mother tongue.. but get someone to proof read and correct
      - There are no powerful call to actions..
      - I don't understand why there is a "wait before you leave my site" halfway down.. why do you think they should leave then?... ok maybe I will leave.. (hint hint )
      - Google will destroy you because there is only really one page.. expect to pay about 10-15 per click
      - Headline is way too generic.. so is the site. If your promoting a niche then tailor your site to that niche.. General product Review for a specific product is one way for the visitor to think your not an authority in the area.. eg I'd rather learn love advice from people who focus on love advice.. not someone that also sells teeth whitening and ringtones.

      I know it sounds harsh but try to go through some other affiliates in your niche and see what they are doing. Find ones that look great and feel good and ask yourself why it is they are so good.. then adapt yours to suit.

      Hope this helps you a bit.. i'm sure others will also give feedback.. so take it as constructive criticism and use it for the better.

      Cheers
      Will
      Originally Posted by misterwrecker View Post

      Actually the color isn't that bad, I just prefer solid but that doesn't really matter anyway.

      "SANTHANA is offering guide and review on all general product information from A to Z"

      Change that to this:

      "SANTHANA offers guides and reviews on all general product information from A to Z"


      Personally I would scrap this slogan. First of all you have a bold statement but only one product review on your site.
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