I need your feedback on my pre-sell page..

by Amund Opsahl

Posted: 16 years ago 6 replies

INTERNET MARKETING

Affiliate Elite Review | Affiliate Marketing Software

Is there anything I can improve, if so, what?

Thanks for your time,
Amund.

#feedback #page #presell

martinp 16 years ago

Visually it looks fine, but it wouldn't sell it to me. Personally I prefer a review - yours looks more like a sales page rather than a presell. A good presell should have your potential customers ready to pull out their credit cards before they even get to the actual sales page. When buying an internet marketing product I usually shop around until I find a credible review from someone who has actually tried out the product. I like to read a recommendation that I feel I can trust.

That's just my personal preference as a buyer though - and as an internet marketer who creates presells that's what works for me.
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Ross Dalangin

16 years ago

Actually we don't have similar approach in pre-selling.
Your site must not be look like a sales page.
What I mean here is no hard selling. Don't be a salesperson.
I have an example in my sig...find it

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Amund Opsahl

16 years ago

Thanks for your opinions.

Originally Posted by Ross Dalangin

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Ross Dalangin 16 years ago

Didn't noticed that..it's ok now!
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Brad Spencer

16 years ago

Originally Posted by Amund Opsahl

Affiliate Elite Review | Affiliate Marketing Software

Is there anything I can improve, if so, what?

Thanks for your time,
Amund.

Bit of a hard sell at this point...it looks hypy to me. I would build a list of benefits and go from there.

I see no real reason for me to click your affiliate link.

Sorry if that's brutal but it's just my opinion

Cheers,

Brad Spencer