Please, criticize my squeeze page....

by DavidSaaf 7 replies
Hi,

Here it is: yoga relaxation, yoga exercises to get in shape fast




Thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author DavidSaaf
    come on guys, please
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  • Profile picture of the author strive4impact
    Overall, I think it looks good.

    A couple of thoughts...
    Can you add audio on there? Audio has been shown to increase conversion by as much as 20%.

    Underneath the picture of the product, add a caption

    "Your Complete Yoga Resource" "The Best Expansion Of Your Yoga Knowledge"

    Something like that.

    Are you testing? Test three different headlines to see which performs best.

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    • Profile picture of the author DavidSaaf
      Wow, great tips! Thank you.. Yes I'm still testing the headline.

      I need more suggestions for the caption :-)


      Many thanks
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      • Profile picture of the author quicksilver
        Hi,

        In the header I'd italicize 'Healthy' and 'Active' but not 'Lifestyle'.

        I agree with the audio suggestion, what about music with an Eastern sound. (My masseuse plays it when she's working, very calming.

        Caption?

        'The Only Way To Inner Peace'

        The site looks great, nice design.

        Good luck with the business

        Mike
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        • Profile picture of the author DavidSaaf
          Originally Posted by quicksilver View Post

          Hi,

          In the header I'd italicize 'Healthy' and 'Active' but not 'Lifestyle'.

          I agree with the audio suggestion, what about music with an Eastern sound. (My masseuse plays it when she's working, very calming.

          Caption?

          'The Only Way To Inner Peace'

          The site looks great, nice design.

          Good luck with the business

          Mike
          The Mike Hayes Total Info Site

          Yep, I'm looking for the calming music!! Thanks a lot..
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          • Profile picture of the author Greg Cooksley
            Hey David,

            Overall I think it's very good....

            Just follow those suggestions above....If you are going to attach
            audio give the person the option to start the audio themselves.
            I for one, hate the audio starting automatically....

            But as they say.....test, test, test......and then do some testing...

            Regards

            Greg
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