What do you think of my new theme?

by NeedBucksNow

Posted: 9 years ago 4 replies

INTERNET MARKETING

Hey everybody. Just been working on my site a little bit tonight and decided to give it a new theme to try and get a little more wow factor when somebody new comes to it. Just wanted to get some feedback about what you all thought of my new theme and if you had any other recommendations that I should use for it. Think it looks better tho and will probably stick with this until I'm able to make some extra money to get a really nice paid theme like Genesis

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winnermarketing 9 years ago

1st link: I think you need more symmetry.
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DoubleOhDave 9 years ago

I like it in general, but have 2 suggestions:
1. The video looks kinda blurry and pixelated and too big - it wouldn't make me click on it, or look further down the page if I wasn't doing so to give you feedback.
2. The text is all very "meh" - I suggest breaking it up into smaller paragraphs, using some bold text and headlines to break it up - add some more images and make it skimmable so that even someone glancing through it gets the idea of what you are about so they can decide to go back and read the whole thing again.
3. Sorry - I am adding 3 as an afterthought: Create a headline that gives people a reason to read the rest of the page, as it's not explicitly clear what the site is about.

Hope that helps!
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@tjr 9 years ago

Your menu on mobile:

Very awkward in my opinion.
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Gambino 9 years ago

I viewed the mobile version (from the link in your profile). Not a huge fan personally.

1. Background image seems like an odd choice. Since your headline is about working from home on your about page but your image is from a cliff somewhere.

2. The first thing I saw was your logo and my first though was "amateur". It looks like it was created in Paint. Builds no trust or credibility IMO.

3. To many ads for my liking. Again, to me it screams "amateur". I think driving traffic away from your site is counterproductive. Sure you may make a few dollars here and there, but on the about me page, I passed 3 chances to leave before I got to the bottom email sign up form. I think you should switch out your ads with the ability to join your mailing list for a free gift. Then have a funnel in place in the back end.
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